*A collaboration with my new-found pen-partner, Josslyn Turner of A Life In Transition.
From Darkness
Stumbling, catching breath
Through forest of black
Where dreams are scarce
Breakaway from the static
Searching, seeking light
‘tween trees like beasts
Death seething in the gloom
Catching souls that wilt
Struggling, fighting for purpose
Escape from the lingering shadows
Where regrets are abundant
The light above awaits
Climbing, rushing towards light
Away from a thousand broken promises
Inside the brightness of heaven
Beating heart’s now even.
Following the whispers of the wind
Toward a life anew
Heaven can wait another day
My time is here and now.
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Photo Credit: Ariel Ophelia
Beautiful, you both! ❤️
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thank you, Kunal!
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So many great lines and phrases–I especially love “souls that wilt”; that’s exactly how it feels sometimes 🙂
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yeah. i perfectly understand, my sister. 🙂 ❤
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🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤
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:):)
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Beautiful collaberation. I always love the truth of darkness and light overcoming it, in any form, whether that’s horrible trees holding you caught by regret, and the sunlight merely shining through, or some other way to show this. And in the end I think you are both right we need to live in the here and now, heaven will come in time enough. Mean while we have light to guide.
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wow. those are wise thoughts, Mandi! I am glad this poem resonated with you, dear. 🙂 Thank you for sharing your deep comment, Mandi! 🙂
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Thanks. It most definitely did. Awesome job both.
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thank you dear Mandi! 🙂 ❤
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Thank you, Mandi! 🙂
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Thank you again for working with me on this beautiful piece! ❤
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I should thank you for making my lines better, Joss! 😉
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I just tweaked them a little, but your words gave this piece more meaning. ❤
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oh thank you! 🙂
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🙂
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❤
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What a beautiful piece of collaboration. I love the imagery painted on one’s mind. The struggle, the resilience and triumph.
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wow. your last sentence sums it up beautifully, dear Jacq! Thank you! ❤
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Such a rich and powerful collaboration. Loved it!!
Blessings to both of you!! ❤
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Thank you darling! 🙂 Blessings back to you! ❤
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Wow. 💕 💕 💕
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yay! thank you, Sarah!
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Of course! 😊 😊
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❤ ❤ ❤
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From darkness into light that is the here and now. The overwhelming language of the dark–the forest and the “beasts” and all the intense struggling–led me to think we were going to stay there, as if imprisoned. But by the end we are free. Yay! This is a first-rate collaboration. My thanks to you both!
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There goes your insightful wise words, again, brother! Thank you very very very much. 🙂
We can be free, we hold the key. ❤
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We can be free,
we hold thee key.
Wonderful, sister!
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yay! thank you, brother!
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Oops. Extra e in the (thee). Makes it sound religious, maybe.
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Yeah!! Actually! 😀
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I love this poem from darkness to light!♡♡ great writing!
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oh dear Sheridan! Thank you dearly! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Oh wow.. this took me deep into the woods. Stumbling, searching, struggling, climbing then finally following the light the guides the way. Poignantly written, you two~! ❤
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WOW! You find the way my dearie! 😀 Thank you very much!
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As long as there is light to guide my way… ✌️😁✨
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yeah!!! me too! too afraid to find away when it’s dark!
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HAHAHA! Yep, those ghost XD
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yeahhh! and cockroaches too! HAHAHA you know they lurk in the dark!
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Hahaha! That too XD
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YEEAH! 😀
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Wow! What a beautiful collaboration that is! Love it ❤
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thank you dearest, Srivi! P.S.
Please know that I am thoroughly honored that you are catching up reading! GEEZ. Thank youuuu!
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As I have stated, (I guess many times), I just love reading your posts, dear.. So, I need to thank you for writing such lovely posts 😘 ❤
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Oh nooo. I should take you because you’re so sweeeet! ❤❤❤❤
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Now is the time, so true!
xoxo
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Thank you! 🙂
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