Bullet Train

june 27

Like a
screeching,
screaming,
speeding,
train,
you
hit me,
crushed me,
ripped me–
clothes
and
beyond.

03.26.2016
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.

Photo credit: Unsplash

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35 thoughts on “Bullet Train

      1. I think there’s a bullet-type train on the east coast. It seems to have many problems. I think I’ll stick with your poetic treatment with the train. More than scary enough (ha-ha)!

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  1. Love can indeed, hit, crush, rip us apart in a good way as well..At times, love is so powerful, that when it hits us, it leaves us stunned and confused as to what’s happening around us.. But at the end, it leaves one with an amazing feeling 😀 ❤
    Loved this speedy, ripped up take on love ❤

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