Burning Heart: A Tanaga*
Spring’s warm sprays defrost cold heart
Frozen veins wake up, restarts
Your roots slowly crawls, take part
Will you make heart a sweet art?
I nurture, tend, rear, your pulps
as you reveal bold red-striped bulbs
stunned, dazed, amazed I gulp,
heart’s now burning with your love.
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©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Fine Art America
In response to Napowrimo Day 5.
Today, I challenge you to spend some time looking at the names of heirloom plants, and write a poem that takes its inspiration from, or incorporates the name of, one or more of these garden rarities.
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- The Tanaga is a Filipino stanzaic form that was originally written in Tagolog which to my ear is one of the more musical of languages. (Kumusta ka? Mabuti salam at) The form dates back to the 16th century and has an oral tradition. The poems are not titled. Each is emotionally charged and asks a question that begs an anwer. This form was found at Kaleidoscope.The Tanaga is:
- stanzaic, written in any number of quatrains.
- syllabic, 7-7-7-7 syllables per line.
- rhymed, originally aaaa bbbb cccc etc., modern Tanagas also use aabb ccdd etc or abba cddc etc or any combination rhyme can be used.
- composed with the liberal use of metaphor.
- untitled.
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Beautiful poem and a new form too 🙂
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yes! a special form because it is from my country! 😀
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🙂 It’s a great form.
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yay! thank you! Filipinos are naturally ‘makata’ or poetic. We love using flowery words. 😀
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You’re welcome 🙂 that’s really cool.
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Yay! Thank you, dear Mel! 😀
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You’re welcome 🙂
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❤
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Beautiful poem and I loved the happy ending!! 😀
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hahaha! that happy ending is for you! ❤
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LOL! THANK YOU!! ❤ ❤ ❤
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yay! thank YOU!
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I love all the different forms of poetry you’re sharing. Another lovely piece 🙂
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thank you Jade! This one is a bit more special because it is from my country, the Philippines! 😀
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I love love love this, especially this:
“Will you make heart a sweet art?”
I will! 🙂
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Yay! Thank you, Nandita!
You have already! 😉
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I think I have. :):)
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Yes you do! ❤
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Beautiful ❤
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Thank you, Nadine!:)
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💕💕💕
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This is SO beautiful–and you’re a natural at the Tanaga form!
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haha! Thank you! Maybe because Tanaga and I have the same roots? 😀
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Exactly my thoughts!! 🙂
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haha! thank you! 😀
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You’re most welcome 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Exquisite! This journey is taking you to some lovely new places in poetry!
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I agree, Vijaya! I am discovering new paths I haven’t taken yet and it is quite tough yet exciting! 🙂
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You have found your poetic stride! Congratulations!
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i guess so! 😀 thank you!
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I’m a sucker for flowers. That’s a gorgeous flower and it’s been given a truly fitting poem.
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yay! me too! and I sooo love tulips! 😀 It is so expensive here in my country but my boyfie gave me four already so i am touched. haha! 😀
Thanks, NJ!
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Thank you again! 😀 😀 😀
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thank you! 😀
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