Fly: A Fib


Fly: A Fib
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer

leave thy
weights and loads,
tear off doubting cloak,
follow the sun, let go, just float.

Photo credit: Kupono Kuwamura

In response to Blogging from A to Z Challenge: F is for Fib


Fib or fibonacci poem is based on the Fibonacci sequence. The number of syllables in each line of the poem is the sum of the previous two lines: 1, 1, 2, 3, 5, 8.

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57 thoughts on “Fly: A Fib”

  1. I absolutely love flight and loved the imagery you evoked with your words. I’m also thankful for your explanation about the form. I knew you had to be following a pattern, but had not heard of poetry following a Fibonacci sequence. Great job!

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      1. Other than take off and landing, riding an airplane is like riding a bus except you are guaranteed a seat 🙂 Instead of road noise, there’s engine noise and air whooshing by. Other than that, it’s not much different except that the ground is a looooong way down.

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      2. Just the take off and landing bits are little tense. The rest of the ride is really boring. You’re stuck in a tiny seat for lots of hours with a numb butt and cramped legs and nothing to do except watch movies you won’t ordinarily have watched if you had a chance.

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      1. Oh, and I just wrote a Fib (been seeing these everywhere recently, and then, when I saw yours, I thought, “Why not give it a whirl?” and so, I did!
        Thought I should let you know! See what your Fib poem did?! Thanks! 🙂

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  2. This is such a motivating poem. It is like one of those “positive, keep reminding yourself that life ain’t that bad”, kind of poems. Can I keep this quote as a life reminder? It’s perfect.
    P.S. I love the pictures you upload too.

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    1. Love the “positive, keep reminding yourself that life ain’t that bad”! Like really, NJ! 😀 😀 😀

      Sure dear! I think I will post this one, too, in my room as one of my dream is to fly! 😀

      Those photos are from Go visit it and you can surely find a lot of photos that you can use with your lovely poems, too! 😀


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