An eerie blanket of silence wrapped the courtroom. The accused stood, confidently, without a trace of remorse on his rather innocence eyes.
Without reading the grim report of a young married woman who went missing, then body parts being discovered one by one– legs, arms, head– none can even guess the suspect would be a youthful teenager. Until he confessed and surrendered and then plead not guilty.
“I thought I am guilty of killing her, but I am not. I did not kill her. I just took back what she said is mine before she married that stupid man.”
No one tried to speak.
“Her heart is mine, and will forever be mine. I buried it under the logs beside my home, our could have been home. I gave her back to the world who never dared to accept us. I only kept her heart. What is wrong with that?”
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Word count: 150
©2017 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Loreta Notto
For Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers (FFfAW) May 02, 2017. 
Wow Rose I’d say he’d have a few years in which to find an answer to his question…
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i agree, Michael. i hope before he dies he will somehow have his answer.
thank you, Michael!
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Oh WOWZA, Sister–this is beyond deep and raw power–wowwww.
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awww. thank you sissy! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Most welcome ❤
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This is just SO Good, Rosey–so many killers have odd-ball reasons for their crimes that make sense to them, bizarre like this one. You nailed it!!
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awww. thank you sissy love! got to be a bit gore. hehe. 😀
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🙂 🙂
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Oh my. 💖💖💖💖
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thank you, love! 🙂
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Boy! The dude is all degrees of psycho.
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hehe. true! kinda gore noh? 🙂
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Powerful Rosema. I have sat across an interview table with people like this. It is good how you have kept real the way they justify what they do.
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i got to credit dame Agatha Christie, James Patterson, Lis Wiehl and the likes for giving me clues on how to pull this off. 🙂 hehe. Thank you, Davy!
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🙂
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It’s really mind-boggling how a person thinks his warped stance is justifiable…great take!
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i cannot agree more! our conscience can really be blinded. sigh. thank you, Saima! ❤
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the last paragraph just blew my mind Rose!!!
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hehe. gore noh? thank you Mich!
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Very chilling! He killed her to keep her heart from loving another! Great story Rosey!
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yesss. i missed some gore. hehe. thank you dear PJ! ❤
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Murder she wrote 😁 Jokes apart, this is just so chilly! Brrr…
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i miss killing. HAAHA! Thank you dear! ❤
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I can see that you do 😁
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eep. haha
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My gosh, Rosema, he’s my kind of psycho! I’ll definitely read a full-length story on this. If he couldn’t have her, then no one else could so he killed her and kept her heart from loving another. ❤ ❤
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your kind of psycho hehe. thank you dear! 🙂
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Most welcome!
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Not a stable mind, perhaps he should plead insanity. Powerful writing.
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you can be a good defense attorney, Iain. 🙂 thank you!
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Wow! What a connection of the logs and love! And the prose is lyrical 🙂
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awww. thank you Indy!
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Powerful writing, this is not my kind of genre, but I throughly enjoyed reading this short story. Well done.
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thank you, Michael!
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Ouch! This is great Rosema. So you not only write poetry but fiction as well. Good on you girl.
Please have a lovely weekend.
🙂 ❤
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hehe. yes dear. ❤ I try from time to time. 😉
Thank you, Staci!
How are you?
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🙂 ❤
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Great take on the prompt! I am absolutely speechless…such a rich story in so few words!!
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awww. thank you Kay! ❤
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My pleasure ☺
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❤
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He’s totally a mad man!
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i agree! thank you, Jacq!
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Yikes! But it’s a great story, Rosema! 🙂
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hehe. thank you, Shweta!
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Don’t mention it, dear! 😊
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❤ ❤ ❤
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