gone
are the days of a
clear, singing underworld
now
icebergs are made
of forgotten plastics
half
way, photographed
before it fin’lly sinks,
sea
turtles’re choking with
once-kissed resin straw
have
we peeled your rainbow
scales with our cruel claws?
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A very nice take on the prompt, we should respect all the life .
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I agree. Thank you, Vandana.
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Great take on the prompt, Rosema.
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Thank you, Shweta.
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I like the wordplay in the title and the juxtaposition of the ‘clear, singing underworld’ with the human-made world of ‘forgotten plastics’ and choking turtles. The final question is hard-hitting.
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Thank you for your thoughtful feedback, Kim!
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Awesome analysis of status and our unending heedless contribution to the downward slide.
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such a powerful feedback, Ron. i agree. thank you.
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now
icebergs are made
of forgotten plastics
A very chilling image!
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ahh. cannot get rid of that image when i saw it on Time’s cover, sigh.
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An apt warning
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indeed. thank you, Debi!
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Gah. Those turtles choking on “once-kissed resin straw” really hit me in the gut. May we always respect the sea for the huge part of our world that it is.
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ahh. i am praying with you, De. thank you!
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We humans have a lot of sins to answer for… poor turtles.
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i cannot agree more, Bjorn. 😦
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Your imagery is powerful – icebergs of forgotten plastics, sea turtles choking on straws. The answer to the final question is damning…
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thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback, i wish they weren’t true.
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I admire your message here – let’s take care of our environment. The ending lines are powerful:
have
we peeled your rainbow
scales with our cruel claws?
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thank you for highlighting that part, Grace. that’s the hardest one to write.
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A sad tale of the carelessness of man. Will we never learn?
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the answer is sad. thank you, Beverly
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It’s a fair assessment and a dire warning. Plastics and other trash ruin the Earth at the macro- and micro-levels. I’m sure you know that now there is an island world of floating trash in the Pacific. It’s enormous. And we’re breathing in molecules of pollution as well. It’s a theme I don’t think we can write enough about–and you about it strongly here, sister!
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I just googled the island you mentioned and i got goosebumps. soooooo horrible. what have we done!!! sigh. thank you, brother.
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Sad, true and poignant words. Very well-expressed. 🙏
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thank you for your kind words. ❤
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Love the last couple lines. You did not sugarcoat the cruelty of the environment’s current situation, but you still managed to show it in a sad, beautiful light.
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Thank you for your thoughtful comment, dearie. it is indeed sad.
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💛 You know, in a way one might think of that peeling of scales as something beautiful. Getting it. Though, when “none of worth – why worry – why care” is the view, even the child comes short. It has with heart to do.
Ai enjoyed the technique by which you open two lines by a single word. Also in music, this way of doing it might be pointed at, some would now. Also, aI am enthusiastic about your finger pointing to the word “scale”. In Norwegian, that word would be “skjell”, and differently from in English, we have this adjective, which is “skjellig”.
Your clear message is timely. The question in the end is of effect. Nevertheless aI suggest you turn those lines into a judgement. The question mark only rarely makes it, in poetry. 🙂
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Thank you for your thoughtful feedback. Learned a lot from it.
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We have so much to answer for!
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agree, dear Diana! Sigh. I hope you are fine! ❤
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I am doing well by God’s grace, thank you, and I trust that all’s well with you.
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Ah. To God be the glory. Yes, my friend. ❤
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The imagery are really brilliant and powerful..i can see the turtles…the iceberg…ahhh what have we done?
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aaaaah. i don’t know anymooore. T_T Thank you, dear Mich!
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