Soft murmurs say the end is near,
this earth will crumble, disappear.
Will you let your story end here?
Mouths gurgling aged, frozen beer,
choosing to leave peace’s hemisphere.
Soft murmurs say the end is near,
tired earth sinks under cloud of fear,
birds choke with vows so insincere,
will you let your story end here?
Even spring delays its annual cheer,
while fragile buds still persevere.
Soft murmurs say the end is near,
more hands now filled with bloodsmear.
Helpless in this cruel atmosphere,
will you let your story end here?
No, you cannot save all humans, dear,
but you can be: change’s pioneer.
Soft murmurs say the end is near,
please don’t let your story end here.
—
Great ink
LikeLiked by 1 person
ah thanks a lot!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I love how you developed this. No, lets not end our story here!
LikeLiked by 1 person
oh thank you! im grateful you found the poem good. 🙂 and yes, please, let’s not.
LikeLike
Don’t believe the naysayers. Love this strong message of your villanelle:
No, you cannot save all humans, dear,
but you can be: change’s pioneer.
There is still time to act and do our part to avoid bloodsmear (such a creative word pairing).
LikeLiked by 2 people
Yes, Grace! May this be our chant. Thanks a lot!
LikeLike
I love the inspiration this poem gifts. My favorite phrase “while fragile buds still persevere.”
LikeLiked by 2 people
awwww. that feedback tickled my writing heart. thank you so much.
LikeLike
No, our story won’t end here. Great piece!
LikeLiked by 1 person
yes! it won’t! Thank you, Diana!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Most welcome, my friend!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I think it is good to be a change pioneer. There is a lot of promise in that line.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I am grateful you heard the promise. Thank you
LikeLike
Pioneer of change, love that–we all have the potential.
LikeLiked by 1 person
yes. all of us. thank you, Ennle!
LikeLike
Most welcome, dear heart ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
❤ ❤ ❤ ❤
LikeLike
5 (grace) times the love!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
yessss!
LikeLike
🙂 ❤
LikeLike
I like your use of the form, it’s very well structured. Your message is urgent and vital – I think the repetitions add to that. The message needs to be repeated over and over.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ah. Thank you so much, Sarah. This world is just becoming too much. Sigh.
LikeLike
Beautifully written and i feel this is the best post I have read, what a way to start the day. Thank you.
LikeLiked by 1 person
You are far too kind. Thank you so much!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Just saying what I feel. Lovely writing.
LikeLiked by 1 person
aww. thanks again!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Good advice! If only our leaders would listen…(K)
LikeLiked by 1 person
i agree. sigh. thank you!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I love what you did with this prompt. And you even rhymed with eloquence. Beautiful form, meaningful message.
LikeLiked by 1 person
yay!!! i am so grateful that you noticed the rhymes. i am quite fond of them. 🙂 Thank you, LuAnne!
LikeLike