Perhaps, there is, maybe,
a biological malfunction in me,
instead of a mouth singing
to the tune of bell-voiced hymns
the language of my soul speaks
not with dust-tongued shrieks
but with the dancing lettered-runes
under a smiling owl-light moon,
tiptoeing from my scarlet muscle-cave
flowing, twirling with each brainwave
until they reach the tip of my waiting fingers
where they will be freed, and on earth, they will linger,
across the ringed-sea, they will float,
until I am onboard my only heaven-bound boat.
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you took the word compounds to a new level –
“my scarlet muscle-cave
flowing, twirling with each brainwave”
marvellous! thanks for joining in
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Ahhh. I am grateful you think so, Laura! Thank you so much!
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Thoroughly enjoyed your play with words.
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Yay! I’m grateful that you do! Thank you so much!
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Words coming as naturally through pen (or keyboard) as through voice, and as beautifully – I like this thought.
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Ahhh. Thanks a lot! Really appreciate it.
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Words, words–a poet’s coin of the realm. I really enjoy any poem that reflects the poet’s process.
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Ah. Im grateful that you do, Glenn! thank you!
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I really enjoyed the way you describe the words forming in your mind… the voice is a great topic.
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Thank you, Bjorn! The prompt talked about the love for words. So this happened! 😀
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A nice take on the prompt. I particularly liked: “tiptoeing from my scarlet muscle-cave
flowing, twirling with each brainwave”
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thank you so much for highlighting those sentences, Merril! I appreciate you!
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You’re welcome. 🙂
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Delightfully poetic … 🙂
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Thank you, Kate!
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most welcome!
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Thanks, Kate!
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Beyond Brilliant!!!
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Aww. I’m grateful for you, my sweet soul sister!
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And I’m grateful for YOU ❤
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aww. hugs hugs
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🙂
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This feels like a spell you are casting upon yourself. So mystical.
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ahhh. that’s a very creative way of looking at it. Thanks a lot, Ms. Jade!
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You are welcome.
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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This is so delightful. Let your words flow – lingering and floating. This line speaks to me:
the language of my soul speaks
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Ahh. Thank you for letting the flow carry you through, Grace. ❤
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That was really beautiful It flowed so easy with those wonderful prompts you chose 🙂
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oh. i’m grateful for your thoughts, Christine. Thank you!
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Awesomeeee piece from an awesome poetess! ❤
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DEARIEEEEEEEEE! NAMISS KITAAAAAA!!!! T^T
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Sorryyyy. Tagal ko nang nawala. T.T
Walang kupas ka pa rin dearieee. <3<3 Keep them coming.
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Ikaw diiin! nabasa ko ung mga latest inks mo. Shaks. Grabe. GRABEEEE!!!
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I especially like the dancing lettered-runes. (K)
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ah. love those, too! thank you!
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Very , very good. Personal and mysterious. Fun. BTW, I added a new recording if you are interesting to hear it made more spooky.
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ahh. thanks a lot, Sabio! I hope it won’t give me some nightmares. haha. kidding. thank you!
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Love! Love! LOVE!!
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Back back back at you! 😊
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💙💙
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