Feeble waves made
of infant dusk’s soft wind,
liquid mirror glows
with sunset’s pastel rind.
Fallen plumeria floats,
decaying but still blooming,
faith, be fluid like water —
rippling, shape-shifting, unending.
I write because I read. I read because I write.
Feeble waves made
of infant dusk’s soft wind,
liquid mirror glows
with sunset’s pastel rind.
Fallen plumeria floats,
decaying but still blooming,
faith, be fluid like water —
rippling, shape-shifting, unending.
“Infant Dusk”, “Liquid Mirror”, some terrific amazingness going on here, my poetess. How you seamlessly connected two rivers flowing, into one. One must strive to bloom even when decaying, because what else we helpless humans can do, expect striving. Not all is in our hands. We can just strive, at our very best, and leave the rest to the all powerful Greatness, that is beyond our abilities of comprehension.
Your poems and words have always conveyed a lot in a very few words. This quality is a true God’s gift. And I cannot be prouder.
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Aaaaaahh. This poetic feedback tickles my writing heart. Gratitude to you, my fellow artist, my beloved, my one and only. 😊 God has blessed us both!
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I like the flow of this one!
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Thanks a lot, Diana!
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You’re welcome!
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❤ ❤ ❤
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This is well crafted RW…:-)
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i am grateful you think so, Rob!
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Nice line: “faith, be fluid like water —”
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ahh. Gratitude to you, Frank!
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Incredibly Beautiful.
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thanks a lot, Ennle!
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Welcome.
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The images are so interesting here, the pastels of infant dusk. The feeble ripples and the liquid mirror.
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ah. i hope they delighted your heart, Victoria. thanks a lot!
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lovely flow, thanks
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oooh. im grateful to you, Kate! 🙂
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no way, I’m grateful for your talent, I totally enjoyed this!
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awww. you’re too kind. have a blessed week, Kate!
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🙂
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Every word, every line is perfection!!
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ahh. too sweet of you, Angela! Thank you!
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The pleasure is entirely mine.
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have a blessed week, Angela!
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You too!
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thank you!
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