the sweet tweets of the birds,
the crisp cracks of dried twigs,
the whispered whistles of the wind,
the sounds of the forest orchestra.
oh, surreal and soothing
flora and fauna.
yet they can’t calm me like
how your heartbeats’
thump,
thump,
thump
can.
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05.23.2017
©2017 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
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In response to Sound Off! dVerse Quadrille #33 by Victoria C. Slotto.
I have a sound (adjective) reason for sharing this with you today and ask you now to use the word SOUND in a poem, following the very fun Quadrille form, a poem that soundly (adverb) embraces exactly 44 words, excluding the title. Check out the dictionary. I found a plethora of ways to sound-off. Maybe you will even want to play with assonance, consonance or one of the many ways that sound adds beauty, texture or feeling to a poem.
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Thank you!
Aww, the first part is so soothing and then the second part is even more so ❤️❤️ Welcome back. You’re here after a long time 😘😘
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awwww. yeaaaa! missed it here! 😀 😀 😀 ❤ ❤ ❤
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Love the sound of heartbeats like this…
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thank you, Bjorn!
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*sobbing* this is so beautiful and heartfelt!!! How are you? I haven’t been around for awhile and so glad you’re still here!!! 🙂
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awwwww. thank youuuu! missed you here. I am great. I released a book recently. 🙂 how have you been???
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Ahhh!!! Huge congratulations to you, Rosema! I’m so proud of you, truly! 😀 *checking it out now*
Aw, I’m doing well; thanks for asking! < Still can't believe here we are, after all these months! :-*
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awwww. yessss! finally got to talk to you baaack! 🙂 🙂 🙂 thank youuu!
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Oh, I love this! That sort of solace is what love is all about. It’s sacred.
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aww. i cannot agree more. 😉 thank youuu!
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You’re welcome! 💜
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Some nice contrasts here Rosema and your use of sound gives the poem lots of impact.
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thank you for yet another beautiful analysis of the poem, Davy!
Btw, how’s my baby book??? 🙂
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A pleasure Rosema. I am savouring the book slowly. Enjoying what I have read so far. I plan to do a feature in a few weeks in my Hangout Thursdays and will mention the book, if that is okay with you.
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awwwww. that will be toooo sweet of you. i will be honored.
BTW, will you be willing to share a photo of the book and you? hehe.
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Of course Rosema, although it may reduce sales drastically 🙂
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HAHAHAHA! Nooo. HAHAHAHAHA
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Oh how I love aural pleasures of the woods, but you’re right, listening to my baby daughter’s heartbeat or breath, even more.
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oh wow. that is so beautiful. thank you for such a lovely feedback!
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I like this so much. As wondrous as nature is, it is obscured by the sound of a loved one’s heartbeat. Nice images for the first part of the poem, too.
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awww. thank you Ms. Victoria. Your prompt is so inspiring. 😉
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A truly serene poem, I adored the first stanza which transported me to the forest and I could hear the birds off in the distance. The second stanza just touched my heart!
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awwww. such a lovely and heartfelt comment dearie Jade! i can’t help but be cheesy haha.
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Soothingly beautiful. ❤
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awww. thank you dear!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤
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How a familiar heartbeat can be the most soothing sound of all…beautiful.
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awww. i agree! thank you, Sascha!
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I love the sound of heartbeats.. that soothe the soul… sigh..❤️
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awww yes. thank you, Sanaa!
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Nice comparison between the forest sounds and the sounds of a lover’s heart beating.
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thank you, Frank! 🙂
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You had me with the title! And then the shift to the loved one’s heart beat, like when you lie your head upon their chest and seek comfort not only in the body warmth but the sound.
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awwww. you captured the visuals i had when i wrote this! thank you, Lill!
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I enjoyed the sounds of the forest orchestra 🙂
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aww. thank you, Janice! 🙂
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Love of nature combined with the love of the other is sublime. Wonderful feel to your words, Rosema. ❤ By the way, I love the cover of your book. Good-luck with that!
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awwww. thank you, Olga! i appreciate you! 🙂
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so comforting to feel and hear the heartbeats, my dear!
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awwww. i cannot agree more! thank you, Gina! ❤
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So true and I love that ending line ~
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thank you, Grace! 🙂
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