with the God-painted twilight,
i smiled as i wait for you, my light.
i still don’t have your name,
i still don’t have your face,
but our story will not be a game
neither a fading phase.
the love we’ll share will be true,
someday we’ll be one not two,
darling, i am waiting for you.
—
Wrote this while listening to One Sweet Love by Sara Bareilles.
A nameless face to think I see
To sit and watch the waves with me till they’re gone
A heart I’d swear I’d recognize is
Made out of my own devices could I be wrong?
Ready and waiting (Ready and waiting)
For a heart worth the breaking (heart worth the breaking)
But I’d settle for an honest mistake in the name of
One sweet love
—
This is beautiful 🙂
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thank you! ❤ ❤ ❤
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I love this.
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awww. thank you, love! ❤
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How wonderfully hopeful and romantic ❤️❤️❤️ Glad to see you back, dear ❤️❤️❤️
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awww. thank you dear NJ! Weekends are off here on WP. hehe (i have no laptop. -_-)
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Story of my life hahaha. Beautifully written as always Rose. ♥
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hahaha. story of my life too. natrapik yata, Gly? HAHA
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HAHAHAHA… medyo naiinip na nga ako eh, haha lol. Pakibilisan naman please hahahaha…
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ito yata kasi yung dahilan: ” I had a hard time falling asleep (just like falling in love, charot.) ” hahaha
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HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA OMG… dami kong tawa! hahahaaha totoo yan kasi nga di pa siya nagpapakita! hahahaha 😛
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HAHAHAHAHA. Dami ko ding tawa nung nabasa ko e. winner ung travelogue mo bes. hahaha.
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In fairness sa inyong dalawa nakalimutan ko na ang sasabihin ko bout the poem..naaliw ako sa kabaliwan nu..
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HAHAHA! ano ng sasabihin mo po? HAHA
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Ano na nga ba? Hehehe….
Goodluck na lng sa pag aantay nyung dalawa …ipanata natin yan….mahal na araw na…hehe
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HAHAHAHAHAHA! ipanata! HAHAHAHA
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These two poems blend beautifully Rosema, they could be one poem. 🙂
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oh the words below are lyrics of the song i was listening to when i wrote this poem. ❤ Thank you, Davy!
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That makes the poem all the better Rosema. When I read both they blended seamlessly together. My brain must have omitted some of the information lol 🙂
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oooooooh. (now i am extra flattered because Sara is such a poetess/songwriter! :D) and i think you need some more sleep? HAHA. kidding! thank you, Davy!
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It is called “getting old” Rosema 🙂 In thirty years time you will be having similar experiences 🙂 🙂
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HAHAHA. i prefer signs of ageing. 😀
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🙂
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waiting for the right one takes patience like this my dear one and you put it really beautifully, your words express so much hope.
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awww. i cannot agree more. but the wait will be worth it. ❤ ❤ ❤ thank you, Gina!
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Beautiful! ❤
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aww. thank you! ❤
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🙂 🙂
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Awwwww I totally squealed reading this. And that song provides the perfect background music 🙂
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Awweee.. this will be the poem of my life. Beautifully hopeful, dearieee 😘
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awww. yes. this is our poem. hehe. it’ll be worth it though. 😀
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Amen to that.. *waits patiently *
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waiting with you! 😀
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❤
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thank you! 🙂
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This is a lovely poem, Rosey, beginning with the 2 opening lines–which I’m crazy for ❤
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awwwww. thank you sissy! 😀 😀 😀 ❤ writing from the heart like you! ❤
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Ohhhh my, aren’t you the Sweetest ❤
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awww. you tooooo!
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You’re just precious! ❤
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you are too sissy love! ❤
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Awwww 🙂
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This is lovely Rosema.
🙂 ❤
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thank you so much, Staci!
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More than welcome, my friend.
🙂 ❤
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Beautiful
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