I smell how the supposed sweet, summer aroma turned into a chilling winter scent as I watch how her soft, smooth skin turns from blushed pink to lifeless violet. I listen to her frail heartbeats, silently begging, pleading, helpless against her quite incoming death.
With a tear-stained face, my mouth utters its own prayer as I hold my almost dying newborn sister. With my shaking arms, I wrap her little body and hope my warmth can give life to thee like the spring sun’s kiss to a frozen naked tree.
My little spring bud
is now a blooming flower.
Death, love can conquer.
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02.07.2017
©2017 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Unsplash
In response to dVerse‘s Haibun Monday Ekphrasis and Haiga by Björn Rudberg (brudberg).
Today I would like you to write a haibun on any subject that you like. but you should illustrate it with one picture, and let picture prose and haiku complement each other.
P.S. This haibun is a recollection of a scene which happened six years ago when I held my almost dying sister. Today is her 6th birthday and she is still with us. ❤
Oh my, so glad to know your sister survived!
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thank you so much, Lynn! 🙂
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Oh, lovely! 😊
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thank you, love! 🙂
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Always!
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Happy, happy birthday to your sister ♥ 😀
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awww. thank you, Gly!
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I’m so happy that she made it, it must be terrifying to recall what could have happened. Love how you painted it as a winter scene. It works so well
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Thank you so much, Bjorn! ❤ ❤ ❤
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I am glad she survived and that you were there with her. This looks like a memory you could expand on further outside of a haibun context.
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i would think of it. 🙂 thank you, Frank!
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I’m glad you added the information at the end. Your haibun would have been too tragic for words otherwise. The juxtaposition of spring and death is perfect.
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thank you so much, Jane!
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Oh, my, Rosema. This is so full of emotion, it brought me tears. What a lovely ending. I’m so happy she’s blossoming. 💜
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awww. i am so happy to hear that. thank youuu, Angela!
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You’re welcome. 💜
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❤
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Ahhhh, it was such a relief for me the reader to read your sister is Hale and heart now… A very very fantastic birthday to hear.
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awww. thank you dear Ameena! ❤
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Goose-flesh!
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ooh. thank you!
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A beautiful haibun. The way you have woven the prose and haiku is excellent and glad it had a happy ending 🙂
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aww. thank you, Davy! 🙂
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A beautiful haibun Rosema and so happy to see your sister survived – the idea that love can conquer death is so powerful in your haiku.
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awww. thank you! 🙂 i am happy too. ❤
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☺💖
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❤
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Such strong emotions when near deaths door. Nice job of expression from a difficult time.
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thank you! 🙂
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Beautiful story Rosey! I’m so glad she was able to save her sister’s life!
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aww. thank you, PJ! 🙂
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Precious life, really beautiful and moving!
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aww. thank you, Iris!
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Pleasure, Rose. 🙂
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thank you dear Iris! ❤
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❤☺
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I’m happy that your sister survived. Happy birthday to her and lovely tribute.
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thank you my dear! ❤
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Most welcome 🙂
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Oh my heavens! I’m deeply touched. To have Hale almost slip from this world and then to have her given back is a feeling I could never give proper expressions to. Both she and you are brave and blessed. Happy Birthday Hale!! ❤
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awwww. thank you so so much dear Lonna! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Always, dear Rosemarie. ❤
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Poignant and poetic. Love the use of flower buds to link the story of life versus death.
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thank you, Paul! 🙂
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I LOVE this so much, Rosey, knowing it’s TRUTH! Be sure to read your b’day poem soon ❤
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awwwww. thank you my dearest sissy! ❤
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Most welcome–And Happy Valentine’s Day to you, dear little Rosey-sister!! ❤
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happy heart’s day to youuuuuuuuuuuu!! ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤
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Yaaaayyyyyy–THANK YOU, ROSEY!!! ❤
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always sissy! ❤
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Thankfully it was over and now both you and your sister can celebrate life in all its fullness ~ Moving write here ~
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i agree. thank you, Grace!
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Wow! Happy Birthday to your sister! Happy to say this.
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awww. thank you! 🙂 ❤
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This is a really touching story. So happy your sister is well. 🙂
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aww. thank you, Anan! 🙂
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yes, happy birthday ! ~
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thank you!
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When I read this, I very much thought you were telling a true story so your note didn’t surprise me. I think it’s really amazing how contact with human skin of a loved one — mother, father, sister, etc. — can bring life into a baby, somehow bring out that fight to live, to cry, and start breathing. Beautiful piece and Happy B-day to your little sis, I’m sure she was spoiled 🙂
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Oh your comment is always profound and heartfelt Mandi. Thank you so much. And yes, almost spoiled. 🙂
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So moving. I appreciate how you have shared this nearly tragic piece of your past with us and I’m so happy that you have your sister to enjoy for years to come. A beautiful write, Rosema.
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Thank you dearly, Mish! ❤
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You, my darling, are an angel. I’m so so happy and grateful your sister’s all well and living a wonderful life 🙂 ❤ I'm trying to write more but I'm rendered speechless by your words.
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awwww. you are always so sweeeet dear Nj! Thank youuu!
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Thankful addition to this post. I’m glad your sister stayed with you all. Fragile read.
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Thank you dear Jacq! ❤
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Wow
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Thank you! 🙂
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This is so beautiful.. ❤ I love it! And I'm so happy that your sister is well. She's a strong one. ❤
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aww. i agree. she is. thank you, Liz!
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