Unsaid Adieu

The half-opened bedroom door.
The mute clothes on the floor.
I could’ve asked for more.

Filled with the scent you left.
Still reeling with the shivers you sent.

Caged inside this haunted house
named after you,
still feeling the ghost of your
unsaid adieu.

©2017 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Unsplash

In response to dVerse‘s Quadrille #26 with the word “ghost” from kim881.
Just write a poem of precisely 44 words, including the word ghost.


76 thoughts on “Unsaid Adieu”

  1. Goodness me! Those first three lines hooked me straight away, especially the ‘mute clothes on the floor’.
    I think the ghost of a relationship could be the hardest to come to terms with.

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