You blurred
my clear windows.
I’m burned.
I want
to start again.
I can’t.
Upside
down, it’s still you
my love.
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In response to OctPoWriMo 2016 by Morgan Dragonwillow‘s Day 29.
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The Musette
is an invented verse form that presents the challenge of writing in very short lines. This form was introduced by Emily Romano and found only at Shadow Poetry. The Musette is:
- stanzaic, written in any number of tercets.
- syllabic, 2-4-2 2-4-2 2-4-2 syllables per line.
- rhymed axa bxb cxc etc. x being unrhymed.
Lovely!
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awww. thank you love! ❤
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I love it..i can feel the longing in each syllable
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awwww. what a very nice comment dear. thank youuu!
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Awwww 😂 this one is so sweet
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awwww. thank you dear! ❤
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🙂 You’re welcome
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You do this form so well, Rosey! And oh, the heartstrings thrum in this.
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awwww. you are the sweetest dear. Thank youuu! 😀
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Most welcome always 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤
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🙂
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An excellent musette Rosema that tugs at the heartstrings. Have a great weekend 🙂
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ooooh. love the rugs the heartstring part, Davy! Thank you! 😀
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Sweet!!
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awww thank you dear! ❤
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Oh goodness, just lovely!
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awwww. thank you dear!
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I guess it’s hard to move when we’re upside-down. Unless we know how to walk on our hands. I don’t. Sister, you describe feeling stuck really well.
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HAHAHAHA! Your comment cracked me up, brother! haha. I cannot do that too. HAHA. Thank you!
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HA HA, you’re welcome!
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😀
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