The growling, glaring velvet sky is angry,
as if it’s sharp lighting and loud thunder can stop you and me
from etching our bodies with lips-made poetry.
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©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Breno Machado
In response to Sonya of Only 100 Words‘ Three Line Tales Week Twenty-Nine.
If you want to join, here are the simple rules:
- Write three lines inspired by the photo prompt.
- Link back to this post.
- Tag your post with 3LineTales (so we can find you in the Reader).
- Read and comment on other TLT participants’ lines.
- Have fun.
Wow. 💕 💕
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oh thank you, love!
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😊😊💕
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❤ ❤ ❤
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That’s gorgeous. Very sensual and descriptive – lips made poetry is a lovely line. Beautiful stuff
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oooh. thank you for such kind words, Lynn! ❤
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My pleasure 🙂
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❤
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🙂
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Beautiful in a softly sensual way!
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aww. you got that sensual! 😀 thank you, Sonali!
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My Pleasure
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aww. ❤ ❤ ❤
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You have a sweet poetic tongue. Beautiful 😊
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awww. that is such a sweet comment, Jacq! Thank you!
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A wonderful, sensual poem Rosema. “from etching our bodies with lips-made poetry”. What a fantastic line.
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thank you Davy! 😀 😀 😀 got to try some sensual pieces sometimes. 😀
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A beautiful poem! Seems our minds frequented the same space for adjectives, both describing the lightening as sharp! Interesting how minds work 😉
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yeah! 😀 😀 😀 and another blogger friend used the same word too which is etched. 😀 Great minds! 😀 😉
Thanks, Shaun!
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Oooh “lips-made poetry”, that’s a great description. Sensual and romantic, simple but profound.
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YAY! Thank you dear Jade! 😀 😀 😀
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I willl to all of you guys… its sensual and i love it..
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Awww. thank you, Mich!
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**will agree
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got that! 😀
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Wow lips-made poetry, what a term you’ve coined and beautifully described
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awww. thank you dear Mel! 😀
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You’re welcome 😁
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Very sweet!! 🙂 🙂
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i must agree! 😀 thank you, PJ!
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The growling sky! That’s exactly what the photo looks like! 🙂 Super!
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awww. thank you! 🙂
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I like the word etching … sounds deeper than writing.
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i agree! thank you for reading! 🙂
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Oh my goodness, oh my goodness…..swooning here… ❤
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Sensual eh? 😍😍😍
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NO there is no stopping love. Never. Good write.
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yes! Love wins, always! 😀
Thank you, Andrew!
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Sister, this is a skillful blending of sky, lightning (thunder), and love-etching. Romance outlasts an angry, stormy sky. Or maybe romance is in part fueled by nature’s passion, too!
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oooh. there goes another lovely comment from my brother! thank youuu! 😀
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Love the imagery….even without the photo its vivid in my mind….Gina
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oh wow. thank you, Gina!
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Yum!! ❤️
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yay! thank you, Momma Moon!
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