The Seven Deadly Sins of Senryu*
*A senryu-series collaboration with Melinda Kucsera of In Media Res.
Melinda, an eloquent poetess and a gifted fantasy writer, is the author of epic fantasy adventure Stars and Angel Sing. Visit her blog and take a thrilling journey as she takes you to the enchanted world of Shayari.
Sloth
Sun sets and rises,
I’m unmoved in unmade bed,
tomorrow, I’ll move.
Get up, get moving–
ignore the couch, your enemy–
turn off the tv.
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Photo credit: Melinda Kucsera
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More deadly senryu tomorrow…
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outstanding !!!
: )
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Thank you so much! 😊
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Thank you!
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I love this series you are doing on the Seven Deadly Sins!
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Thank you! We loved writing it. Now we need to come up something to top this 🙂
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Yes! I wonder what it will be??
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me too! Soon as I catch Rose, i’ll find out. There’s a 12 hour time difference between us and some holidays, but we’ll get it together soon!
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I look forward!
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😀 me too!
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Ooooh! something to top this! HAHA! That would be hard, Mel!
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I know! We’d better get thinking!
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Haha! That is true!
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😀
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I agree that it’s outstanding! I rarely make my bed…though I do manage to drag myself out of it every afternoon 🙂
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hey I don’t mine either. No time in the morning. I have enough time to throw on clothes and run to work 🙂
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And… I’ve read articles that say an unmade bed is healthier, less likely to allow all those microscopic things that feed on our sloughed off skin to do their thing 🙂
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great! That makes me feel better about my unmade bed. I make it up once a week when I put clean sheets on it 🙂
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Yep, sounds like me 🙂
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😀 yay! company!
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Chuckling 🙂
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Haha! 😀
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Haha! I am guilty too!
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🙂
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😀
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Haha! Once a week is a good record, Mel! 😀 😀 😀
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😀 thanks!
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Haha! 😀
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😀
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HAHAHA! Take you for the information! Now I have an excuse to tell my mom. haha! 😀
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Good, I’m so glad to be helpful!! I wish I could give you the reference for an article–but as I’m sure you’re aware, you can go to Google–they’ll have your back!
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Haha! That is true! Thanks! 😀
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Welcome 🙂
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😉
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Good one. Hard sometimes to get up and get going 🙂
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Haha! That is soooo true! Especially when the bed is so soft and irresistible! HAHA
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Well, “unmoved in unmade bed.” I confess. Good telling work, you two!
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I am guilty beyond reasonable doubt, too! HAHA
Thank you!
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Story of my recent life. Well told ladies. 🙂
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Hahaha! Mine too! Thank you! 😀
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