The Seven Deadly Sins of Senryu*


The Seven Deadly Sins of Senryu*

*A senryu-series collaboration with Melinda Kucsera of In Media Res.

Melinda, an eloquent poetess and a gifted fantasy writer, is the author of epic fantasy adventure Stars and Angel Sing. Visit her blog and take a thrilling journey as she takes you to the enchanted world of Shayari.


Sun sets and rises,
I’m unmoved in unmade bed,
tomorrow, I’ll move.

Get up, get moving–
ignore the couch, your enemy–
turn off the tv.

Photo credit: Melinda Kucsera

More deadly senryu tomorrow…

39 thoughts on “The Seven Deadly Sins of Senryu*”

      1. And… I’ve read articles that say an unmade bed is healthier, less likely to allow all those microscopic things that feed on our sloughed off skin to do their thing 🙂

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      2. Good, I’m so glad to be helpful!! I wish I could give you the reference for an article–but as I’m sure you’re aware, you can go to Google–they’ll have your back!

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