after more than a decade of virtual hugs and late night chats, the four girlfriends have finally met again for a summer picnic.
two married, one engaged, one still single, they’ve bonded because of one common denominator: a guy they played love with. a nerd from college who’s known for his ragged blue jeans and an old-day-smelling shirt.
under the hot sun with the smoky smell of barbecue, there was no sound but their joyful giggles. until a dashing, familiar man appeared. until they heard nothing but bangs after bangs. then the green lawn turned red with fresh blood.
silence.
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Word count: 100
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Photo credit: Yarnspinner
For Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers (FFfAW) May 09, 2017. 
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So many unanswered questions! Who was the man? Why did he murder them? I love how idyllic your story started, then… well. Murder, she wrote? 😀
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hehe. if you will read in between the lines you would know. hehe. (i tend to kill a lot when i write fictions. haha.) thank you, Chris!
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Bitin! May episode 2? Haha!
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hihi. wala po. 😀
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Awww…sayang!
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hehe 😀
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Oh my! Chilling! The Nerd has reappeared as a murderer! Great story Rosey! (I just LOVE your book cover!)
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yaaaaaaaaaaay! you got the story clearly dear PJ! ❤ ❤ ❤ Thank you! 😀 (P.S. Aww. Thank you! Proud of my baby hehe)
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Wow, he’s been waiting a long time for the right chance for complete revenge. Good stuff.
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yes! you got it right! 🙂 Thank you, Iain!
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My pleasure 🙂
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❤
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I guess it was the word nerd that turned him bad.
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true! i think so too! thank you, Michael!
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Now Miss. R. just because you are now a famous writer it doesn’t mean you are outside of the law lol. Do you know anything about this?
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Detective D, first of all I am no famous. (my book is hardly selling. haha. but eep. i am a witness only. hahaha
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My sources tell me you have sold at least one 🙂
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hehe. yes i diiiid! ❤
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The silence is deafening!
I’m sorry I have been absent for a bit. I come back to a murder?! I like! Miss you, love you!
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the cover of your book is GORGEOUS
Proud of you, Rosema 🙂
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awww. thank you so much! 🙂 I appreciate you!
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🙂 🙂
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Maybe the nerd finally got his revenge, eh? Intriguing stuff.
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you got that sooo right! 😀
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Yay! ^^
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Oh my my! Don’t underestimate the nerd!
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i agreeeee!!!
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Yikes! Murder she wrote again. One minute I’m going aww and the next minute it’s whaa…😁
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hahaha. i am crazy noh? haha
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No doubts about that 😂
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hahahaha. 😀 😀 😀 😀
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