Inside my hollow chest
lies a heart void of love–
a desert which hasn’t tasted
sprinkles of rain from above.
Then like pregnant drops of dew
on a chilled yet rose-pink dawn,
you kissed my cacti and sand
when you made me your own.
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I write because I read. I read because I write.
Inside my hollow chest
lies a heart void of love–
a desert which hasn’t tasted
sprinkles of rain from above.
Then like pregnant drops of dew
on a chilled yet rose-pink dawn,
you kissed my cacti and sand
when you made me your own.
—
Very sensual rosy…😉
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uh oh? sensual??geez. 😀 😀 😀 Thank you dear!
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It is..for me..lol..😀😀😀
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i think a lot agrees with you! 😀 thank you!
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There is a lovely flow when the heart opens again 💖
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i agree. 🙂 Thank you! ❤
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You are very welcome :o) xxx
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❤
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“you kissed my cacti and sand
when you made me your own.”
~dearie! this is chilling in a very sweet way. ❤
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awww. pasensya na. nakadami yata ako ng asukal lately. HAHA. Thanks, dearie! Love youu! ❤
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What a beautiful lady be story in so few words!
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aww. thank you! 🙂
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That should say love story….but you ARE a beautiful lady, too!
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hehe. it’s okay. i got it. 🙂
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ooh i got goosebumps – all my favourite words in one poem – stunning Rosema!
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awww. i am so happy to hear that dear! 😀 thank you!
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A very sensual and evocative poem Rosema. The last two lines have an element of darkness in them.
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Okay… I am kind of surprised with the comments. HAHa. That this is sensual. 😀 but i will take that as compliments. 😀 Thank you, Davy!
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I remember Silence of The Lambs where there was a hint of sensuality between Hannibal Lecter and Agent Starling and all he wanted to do was eat her :0
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Wooooah! 😀 😀 😀
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The last two lines! Very sensual piece!
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awww. thank you! 😀
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You’re most welcome!
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❤
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Interesting metaphor.
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thank you! 🙂
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This is amazing!
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awww. thank you love! 🙂
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Sweet poem Rosey!
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awww. thank you, PJ! 😀
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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I liked the idea of a first kiss being like a desert getting dew.
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aww. thank you, Frank!
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Oooh, love this Rosema! Very sensual and sweet. And the image is a keeper!
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awwwww. thank you so much! 😀 yea! i love love love that image too! 😀
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Whistles!!❤️ This is wonderfully chilling (in a good way) 😀
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awww. thank you! ❤ ❤ ❤
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This is very sweet… the dawn is a moment just like that falling in love.
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aww. i agree. thank you, Bjorn!
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Love the imagery here
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thank you, Paul! 🙂
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Lovely imagery.
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Thank you, Ms. Sarah! 🙂
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thank you! 🙂
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I like the visuals this invokes.
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thank you so much! ❤
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Always amazing, Rosey!
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awww. thank you sissy! 😀
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Most welcome!! ❤
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❤ ❤ ❤
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What a lovely love poem!
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thank you, Bryan!
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The dawn submits to passion! Great direction here, Rosema!
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Thank you, Walt! 🙂
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Awe…I love happy endings! Beautiful imagery, Rosemarie. Miss you, darling!
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awww. thank you my dear Lonna! Miss youuu too! ❤ ❤ ❤ I am slowly crawling back. HAHA
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Cue the music…”Baby come back, any kind of fool could see…There was something in everything about you”<–One of the songs in my youth. 🙂
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awwwww. you are toooo cute! 😀
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Love the comparison and imagery. Love the poem Rose.
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awww. thank you dear! 🙂
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My pleasure indeed
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When you made me your own…when you made me your own…when you made me your own…
Shiva
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🙂 🙂 🙂 thank you for reading!
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