I woke up without her beside me. We argued last night. Maybe she finally gave up on me. But as I looked for her, I saw the pile of hay arranged in her signature way. She made a breakfast for me. She did not leave me. She was kidnapped.
My mind was racing, so as my noisy hooves as I look for her around the ranch. Then I remembered the wedding.
I rushed towards the pavilion and saw several cars parked and the elegantly-embellished venue. My purely white wife will take the bride to this chapel. I heard she is part of the human’s elaborate wedding hullabaloo that we gladly never had.
We need not an extravagant event just to seal our love, my wife and I surely know that.
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Word count: 130
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Phylor
NOTE: So I am back!!! 🙂 🙂 🙂 Thank you dearest PJ for waiting for me. You know I missed FFfAW a lot! 😀
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In response to Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers (FFfAW) August 02, 2016.
Rules:
- a flash fiction challenge (stories in 100-175 words or less)
- each story should have a beginning, a middle, and an end
- no serial (continuation) stories
- include a pingback to the challenge post
Thank you for hosting this awesome prompt, Priceless Joy!
I missed your works! This one’s really nice. I had to read it again. And as I look upon the photo, finally noticed the horse. I just love it!
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awwww. Thank you dear! That was sooo sweet of you to say!!! The horse in the photo looks like it is waiting for someone so it inspired this piece. 🙂
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But you did it in a really interesting manner. 🙂
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you are so sweet! 😀 😀 😀 thank you!
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It’s so nice to have you back dear sweet Rosey! This story was great! The horses are married and that is so sweet. I love the end where he tells that they didn’t need a wedding to seal their love. Very “horse” romantic!
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HAHAHA! Thank you, PJ! 😀 😀 😀 My initial idea is a married horse and the wife being slaughtered but that would be too tragic for a welcome back post so I opted for something “horse” romantic. HAHA 😀
Thank you, PJ!
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It was great! I’m glad you didn’t have one of them slaughtered! YIKES!
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HAHAHA! Yeah. It’s gross, eh? HAHA
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LOL! I t would have crushed me! Hahaha!
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YEAH!! I know!! I don’t want to break your heart with my comeback. So this was sweet. 😉
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❤ ❤
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💖💖💖
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Ahhh, those are pretty hearts!!
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I agree!!! 😀 😀 😀
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Awww I love this.
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oh thank you, Sarah!
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I didn’t know you were gone. lol
Good write.
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HAha. Been away in FFfAW for a month. 🙂
Thank you, Andrew!
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Lol. He’s shaking his head at the humans. He has his ways, and they have theirs. Too bad their ways involve temporarily kidnapping his wife, though! That’s not cool. Lol. Such a creative take of the prompt.
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Hahaha! Love your adorable comment, Izzy! 😀 Thank you so much for reading! 😀
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Lol. You’re very welcome
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Horses are so smart, aren’t they? They’re clearly the wiser beasts in Gulliver’s Travels. They have wisdom here as well. Keep the wedding simple, folks. It’s the marriage afterward that counts. Thanks for such a pleasurable read, sister!
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Haha! You surely read ‘his’ thoughts, brother! Thank you! 😀
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Aww, even your fables are too sweet dearie!! ❤ ❤ ❤ You're overflowing with love!
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yay! thank you, Maria! can’t be dark for the comeback FFfAW! I love PJ so muhc that i don’t want to break her heart in my comeback tale. 😀
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Aww… that’s too sweet and true, dear. 🙂 You did justice to this sweet, loving tale.
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aww. thank youuu! so do you with that kicking ending!
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aww what a beautiful tale!
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yay! thank you, Mel! that horse looked bothered! 😀
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He did!
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😀
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You have so many fans here, BRAVO!
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awww. thank you, sister! they are so many but you are one of my few favorites 😉
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You’re very sweet to me… ❤
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just being honest, sissy! 😉
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🙂
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BTW, sister. I replied to your emails. 🙂 but need not to rush. it will wait for you. 🙂
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Thanks, sweetie–I’ll be over there in a bit 🙂
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alright, sissy! 😀
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🙂
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Now that’s a romantic horse with a lot of sense 😁
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hahaha! I agree! Thanks, Jacq!
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