Astrobleme

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Astrobleme: An Abhanga*

you are the huge meteor
that dig a deep crater
still hollow years after—
no time can heal.

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Word Inspiration: Sarah Doughty of Heartstring Eulogies (Thank you, Sarah!)


*Abhanga, “the completion” is a stanzaic form commonly used for devotional poetic composition although it has also been used for cynicism, satire and reflective moods. It was popular from the 13th thru 17th centuries Marathi Region of India and is described as complex and classic.

The Abhanga is:

  • stanzaic, written in any number of 4 line stanzas.
  • syllabic, 6-6-6-4 syllables each
  • rhymed L2 and L3 rhyme. Often internal rhyme is employed. End rhyme scheme x a a x , x being unrhymed.
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24 thoughts on “Astrobleme

  1. Love the name of this. I can imagine looking down in this large crater in the earth. And you are very right when you right, “no time can heal.” Yeah, it’s a scar in the earth forever; fascinating cause we know so little about why some hit earth with such force, and others burn up. Great poem!

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