Salted breeze combed my hair as my bare soles sink in sun-bathed sand. With eyes closed, my ears are delighted by the singing pelicans.
Then suddenly, a strong force hugged me from the back. Chills ran through me as his lips moved closer. He whispered “Do you remember?”
Slowly I turned, looked into his full-of-love familiar eyes, and said the words I uttered to him a year ago.
I was speechless when he get down on his knees. After a minute no less, in front of armless Neptune and a full blue moon, I said “I do, of course, yes.”
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Word count: 100
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Mom the Obscure
In response to Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers (FFfAW) May 03, 2016.
Rules:
- a flash fiction challenge (stories in 100-175 words or less)
- each story should have a beginning, a middle, and an end
- no serial (continuation) stories
- include a pingback to the challenge post
Thank you for the lovely prompt, Priceless Joy! I missed this so much and I am glad to be back! 😀
Nice take. Actually a really great place for a proposal. Many people noticed armless Neptune. I just noticed he had such heavy weight on his back/shoulders. I can just see his strain 🙂
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YAY! Thank you very much! It is actually what I noticed first. 😀 ❤ ❤ ❤
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Good one.. 🙂
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Thank you, Ipsita! 😀
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Kiliiiiiiiig!!!!! This is super, super kilig Rosema! Especially that scene in the second line! ❤❤❤ I’m happy for them both.
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YAY!! Thank you, my hopeless romantic Maria! It felt quite weird because I think this is the third time that I have written about proposal. HAHA
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Ayeeee!! Is that a sign?? 😀 😀 😀 YAY! I’ll be thrilled to hear the good news. ❤
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HAHAAHA. Sorry to burst your bubble but no. Not a sign. 🙂 A proposal is a loooong way to go pa. 😀
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Awww!!! Lemme talk to boyfie nga! Why oh why? Haha. Hmm.. we’ll you guys take your time (but not too long, ok?). 😉
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Haha. Let him be. 😀
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LOL! Okiees… 🙂
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Haha. Willing to wait. 😀
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Absolutely yes!! Great story and I love that it is so sweet and “feel good!” I love this Rosema! You have a great comeback story!
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Yay!! Exactly, PJ. ‘Feel good’. This one is for you! You know I miss you and your prompts. ❤
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Thank you Rosema! I miss you and your stories! 🙂 ❤ ❤
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Aww. I feel the same, PJ! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Awww, romance is not dead! Beautiful.
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Yeah. It isn’t? 🙂 Thank you, Keith!
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Aww! Sweet proposal ^_^
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Thank you, Jade!! 😀 😀 😀
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no better place for such reunion
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Thank you! 😀
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I soooo love your take on the prompt!!! 🙂 It is so real. Love the innocence yet cleverness of the child.
P.S.
I am quite unsure on how can I comment on your post.
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This simile is marvelous: “as my bare soles sink in sun-bathed sand.” It sets up the poetic element for the rest (even in prose). Romance with a capital R, Rosema!
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Geez! Thank you very much, Christopher! I think I am loving rhymes that even my fictions can’t help but have some. 😀
Thank youuuu!
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aww “in front of armless Neptune and a full blue moon, I said “I do, of course, yes.” such a perfect moment poetically captured 🙂
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Thank you very much, Mel! 😀 😀 😀 I am now slowly accepting my future as a rapper. HAHA! 😀 😀 😀
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You’re welcome 🙂 you are a poetic “rapper” extraordinaire!
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With extraordinaire, rapper became elegant! 😀 😀 😀
HAHA! Thanks, dear!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Now, this sounds like an idyllic proposal 🙂
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yay! thank you, Jacq! 😀
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Lovely. It’s the perfect place for a proposal. 🙂
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Geez! I would agree! 😀 ❤
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