four pairs of tiny feet
searching through
the summer’s bramble
treasure hunting (no, not gold)
plump, scarlet, wild gems
secured with sharp thorns’ fold
when you are young, you yearn
to pick the sweetest berries
as you age you ache
for this fleeting memory.
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So sweet–like the memories. I love your poem.
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i am grateful you loved it. stay blessed!
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Oh Sister, you always bless me with your fine writing. Hope you are well, and your husband–are you still separated due to pandemic? Love you both ❤
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Oh thank you so much for your kind words, sister. Yes, we are still apart. Not seeing the glint of light at the moment. But God is good. How are you, sister? I hope you are well. ❤ Much love back at you!
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Oh how I long for you two to be reunited–you know what a romantic I am, and I ache for you. YES, GOD IS GOOD!! I’m old and tired, but healthy and SO BLESSED ❤
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That’s great to hear, sister. You are sweetest sister ever. Have a blessed Sunday. ❤
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Sending you HUGE HUGS ❤
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Oh lovely. I never used to understand why people would buy cultivated blackberries in the supermarket, but as I get older I begin to understand.
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That’s true, Sarah. I still miss the wanderings, still, though. Thank you.
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Oh, this is so lovely!
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Thank you, Ms. Linda!
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It seems every last one of us went blackberry picking as youngsters, with fond memories of brambles! Great poem.
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Ahh! That’s something that’s beautiful to remember, right? Thank you!
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This is so beautiful and lovely.
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Thank you, Lucy!
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This one packs a punch, sweet, slightly tart, with earthy undertones like blackberries! 🍇💝
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ahh. your descriptions are so delicious, Sanaa! Thank you!
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One of my first memories (too) is of picking berries. You chose a good memory to bring up, sister! I still like the berries in the here and now, though you’re right about the ache–I no longer pick them.
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Oh. Thank you, brother! Aren’t those amazing times? 🙂
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Lovey…so sweet!
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Thank you, Vivian!
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👍🏽
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❤
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such a delightful insight, so well composed … how are you?
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thank you for your kind thoughts, Kate! I am well. Holding up. How about you?
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going good, getting in some bushwalking 🙂
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Oooooh. What season are you experiencing now?
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a mild winter, cold nights but sunny warm days … when the rain and wind eases off 🙂
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oh that’s a comfy one! stay safe, dear!
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sure am … 8.5+ hours away from the hot spots!
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woah! That’s far and that’s great news ! ❤
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yes I think many forget what a big country this is 🙂
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so truuue!
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Very nice. I enjoyed the poem and the memories.
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Thank you, Bill!
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[…] childhood bramble: a quadrille remimded me of my innocent days in the province. Ugh, take me […]
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yay thank you, dearie!!
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This brings memories of childhood..argghh makes me wanna go home to my mom.
How are you coping in there Rose?
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Gaaah! Me, too!! I wanna be just a kid again, some times.
I am trying to distract myself hehe by watching what-nots of Netflix or by listening to music or by writing and reading. All possible things to keep my mind from dwelling on the uncertainties of this year. Sigh.
How about you, dear Mich?
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Wahhhhh i learned to binge watch too with netflix and extended my yoga to almst 2 hrs lol…🤭🤭🤭
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wow!!! that’s amazing!
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