You stood above me
your hands touching
absent letters in
my nameless grave.
Clearly, that’s how much
you hate having me.
Even a name, just a name,
feels so expensive, so costly.
With shameful smile you begin to cry
for a soul you willingly let die.
The heartbeat you created,
is the same life you ended.
Are you proud now, Mom?
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Photo credit: Unsplash
In response to OctPoWriMo 2016 by Morgan Dragonwillow‘s Day 14.
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Spoon River Verse is a subgenre of Mask or Persona poetry. The term is inspired by the Spoon River Anthology by Edgar Lee Masters, American Poet (1869-1950). The anthology is a series of poems written as if each poem was being spoken by the dead. The setting is a cemetery in an imaginary western town, Spoon River. The voices make up a ‘history’ of the town’s past residents and their relationships.
The Spoon River poem is a poem of voice. The poem speaks from and for a person, not necessarily the poet. The subject, diction and imagery should reflect the character who is speaking through the poem.
Spoon River Verse is:
- framed at the discretion of the poet.
- dramatic.
- written in the voice of a character of a particular time and place. Usually the voice comes from the grave. The person, the era, the location should all be heard through the words of the poem.
Wow, this is amazing!
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yay!!! coming from The Sarah Doughty!! 😀 😀 😀 thank you, loooove!
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Always! 😊
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Wow, deep and troubling, sister. As it’s supposed to be. The first stanza creates an image and an action that are gripping. Then the lines, “Even a name, just a name,/feels so expensive, so costly.” They speak more deeply and dramatically of the wrongs done to the narrator. Powerful!
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oh wow. thank you for confirming that i did my job with this piece, brother. 🙂
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You certainly did, sister!
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What a horribly sad poem that speaks for so many of the babies of this world. 😦
I really enjoyed this poem style, Rosema. I think that some of my poems are written like this, only I didn’t know it had an “official” name for the style. It is just what came out of me. Thank you for including the poem type in your posts.
Have a blessed weekend! 🙂
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Yes, dear. It’s not a new phenomenon. And… it also breaks my heart.
I am glad to know, Suz. Thank you. ❤ ❤ ❤
Blessings back to you. ❤
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You’re welcome, Rosema. And thank you. 🙂 ❤❤❤
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thank youuu too! ❤ ❤ ❤
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🙂
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So well written and I was surprised at the end … what a wonderfully written, albeit sad, poem.
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oh wow. thank you, dear! ❤ yes. a very sad piece.
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Indeed….thank you for writing it, reflections of the day are thought provoking and inspirational.
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This is exquisitely beautiful, and yes, amazing. Makes me think of my mom…
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oh… oh sister. *huuuuugs*
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Thank you–I’m rushing off to bed now, see you Monday. Love you to the moon ❤
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yaaaaaaaayy. love you too my dearest sister. to the mooon and back. 😉
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❤ And stars and clouds of every hue, even when the moon is blue ❤
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Excellent and powerful poem Rosema. The verses pull you through to an unexpected and sad ending.
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oh wow. thank you very much, Davy! ❤
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… and all is revealed in that powerful ending. very impressive.
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wow. thank you, Sir. 🙂
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Hi friend
you’re nomminée for this challenge:
paintdigi.wordpress.com/2016/10/13/creativity-challenge/
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oh wow thank youuu!
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You deserve. Dear friend 🍁 🍁
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Very sad! Also very powerful!
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thank you dear PJ! ❤
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The ending was really sad. Well written and powerful.
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awww. i know dear. sorry and thank you! ❤
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You’re welcome, Rosema 🙂
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❤
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What a powerful poem. I love it!
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awwwww. thank you dear Mel! ❤
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You’re welcome
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❤
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