Tantalizing speaking eyes, serve as windows.
Reveals unspoken letters, mouth always swallows.
Mine’s made of transparent glass, why it failed to show?
My hunching, hiding being, we, humans call soul?
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In response to OctPoWriMo 2016 by Morgan Dragonwillow‘s Day 6.
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The Tanaga is a Filipino stanzaic form that was originally written in Tagolog which to my ear is one of the more musical of languages. (Kumusta ka? Mabuti salam at) The form dates back to the 16th century and has an oral tradition. The poems are not titled. Each is emotionally charged and asks a question that begs an anwer. This form was found at Kaleidoscope.
The Tanaga is:
- stanzaic, written in any number of quatrains.
- syllabic, 7-7-7-7 syllables per line.
- rhymed, originally aaaa bbbb cccc etc., modern Tanagas also use aabb ccdd etc or abba cddc etc or any combination rhyme can be used.
- composed with the liberal use of metaphor.
- Untitled.
I loved this, beautiful word choice. You definitely painted a picture with them. I knew Tanaga was Filipino word, I didn’t know it was a writing style…I like it. Thanks for sharing. 🙂
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Wow. Thank you for such lovely insights, Marie! 🙂
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You’re very welcome. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece!
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oh wow. thank you! ❤
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Oh my my my, Rosey!! This is beyond lovely, and deep–love the form too ❤
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awww. thank you!! I am biased with the form cause it’s from my little country. 😉
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I can so understand that!!
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😀 😀 😀
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❤
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Wowowowow
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it’s always humbling to get those wow’s from you love. ❤
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😊💖😊
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I wish that I could read and understand the Filipino language so that I could read it as it is meant to be read. You write such beautiful things, Rosema. 🙂
Have a blessed day.
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awww. thank you for such sweet words my dear Suz! ❤
Blessings back to you! ❤
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You’re welcome, my friend. Thank you. 🙂
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❤ ❤ you're welcome!
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Beautifully done, dearie. Kidding aside, she should take those contact lenses off. 🙂
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yeah, she might dearie! ❤
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i think she liked it dearie. haha
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Another excellent piece Roseama and another introduction to a poetic form I hadn’t heard before. Thank you.
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Yay! I am fond of this because it is from my country. I hope you’ll enjoy writing it in case you want. 🙂 ❤
Thanks, Davy!
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Oh this is a stunning poetry form and you pulled it off beautifully! Loved the choice of description: the soul akin to transparent glass for example. That was so striking to read.
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Oh wow. that was one insightful comment my dear Jade. Thank YOU! ❤
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Wow those opening and closing lines are intense and full of imagery
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awwww. thank you dear Mel!
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you’re welcome 🙂
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Reveals unspoken letters, mouth always swallows.
I’m really taken with the interplay in this line. Letters unspoken from a mouth that swallows. Smart and clever, sister! As is the tension in the (whole) poem between what is revealed and what hides.
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oh wooow. your insights are always always appreciated, brother! thank youuu!
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She longs for but she is hiding. She will never be seen, if she remains transparent, makes herself small. Nice write!
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oooh. an interesting feedback! thank you, Mandi!
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You’re most welcome 💕🍁
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😀 😀 😀
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