Lay and Let
Lay my bare
unclothed soul,
‘neath the bright
smiling sun,
let calming
sea of greens,
be our bed
for one more time,
let bird’s sweet
soft songs,
be our own
private choir,
let me rest,
‘tween your arms,
hear our hearts
beating as one.
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©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Unsplash
In response to dVerse‘s Quadrille – 9: Green.
It is time for our 44 word count challenge, and seeing the beautiful spring season, the word is green. Use green as a noun, adjective or verb in 44 word post, no more nor less. The title is not included in the word count.
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This is lovely, Rose 🙂
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aww. thank you, Judy! ❤
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Delightful 🙂
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yay! Thanks, Jacq!
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This is beautiful, Rosey!
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thank you very much my dear PJ! ❤ ❤ ❤
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My pleasure!! 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤
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By the way, where have you been? I haven’t heard from you in a few days and I have been worried about you.
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oh. you are just the sweetest dear PJ! ❤ ❤ ❤ I am always away in the internet every weekends because I have no internet connection at home. sorry for worrying you my dear. my posts for Saturdays and Sundays are all scheduled posts.
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No, you are the sweetest! But thank you for saying that.
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Thank you, too! You are sweet, too! 😀
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No, you are sweeter! LOL!
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haha. we both are! 😀 😀 😀
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Hahahaha! Okay. We are both sweet. LOL!!
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yeah! 😀
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Oh I LOVE it, a bit of romance! I haven’t written for d’Verse in a couple years…might try this one 🙂
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yay! I hope to see you there. YEAH! Romance is in the air! 😀
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Romance is like oxygen, right? 🙂
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yeah! it keeps us alive. 😀
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I know!
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🙂
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This is absolutely marvellous. Makes my heart go sha la la la in the sunshine. You really know how to do this ❤ ❤ ❤ loads of love to you, my sweetest dearest princess
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Yay! I am just writing inspired by the sweet persons around me, like you! ❤ ❤ ❤
loads of love back to you my dearest Queen! ❤
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Good girl! 😉
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😀
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Oh I do love this… a wonderful use of the word, such a pity that you haven’t linked up. 🙂
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Hi! Thank you! I think I forgot to link up! 😀
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oh this is beautiful. I love the ‘hearts beating as one’ so romantic!
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i can be bad and i can be sweet. i am a bit bipolar, you think? HAHA.
thank you dear! 😀
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You’re welcome 🙂 you’re no more bipolar than the rest of us 😉
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well i think most writers are! 😀 😀 😀 😀
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🙂 You may be right about that 🙂
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What a gorgeous poem beautiful princess!!
❤❤❤ Dajena 🙂
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Thank you my darling Queen! 😀 ❤
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[…] (Special thanks to Rosema, who reminded me I was missing the Pub prompts… https://areadingwritr.wordpress.com/2016/05/22/lay-and-let/) […]
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yay! ❤
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This is sweet song, Rosema. Loving and romantic. And longing. A superlative response to the prompt.
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Thank you for the superlative comment! I could not ask for more, Christopher! 🙂
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Such a peaceful, lovely poem!
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Hi Vijaya! Thank you! 😀
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I feel so warm and fuzzy and full of love 🙂 That’s how this poem is. Full of love and warmth with just the simplest of things provided by nature 🙂 ❤
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awww. you have seen the meaning beyond my words my dear! Thank you! ❤
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Romantic and lovely!
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yay! thank you, Mandi! 😀
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