I’ll Be: A Tanka*
I’ll be the wind that
whispers comfort to your soul
I’ll be the water
that washes, heals your burnt holes
after you’re engulfed in flames.
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©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Unsplash
In response to May Book Prompts – by Sarah Doughty and MahWrites.
Today’s prompt is When You Are Engulfed in Flames by David Sedaris.
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*Tanka is a classic form of Japanese poetry related to the haiku with five unrhymed lines of five, seven, five, seven, and seven syllables. (5, 7, 5, 7, 7)
Love it! ❤
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geez! Thank you!
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You’re very welcome, love. 😊
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Beautiful Ema, I really like the different elements that you included in your poem. They add power to the poem. And I also love the juxtaposed idea of “healing” yet, the reveling in “enflaming”.
Lovely work my dear friend!
❤ Dajena
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Thank you very very much, Dajena! Your lovely words makes my heart skip a beat! ❤
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Welcome 😀
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that’s a FUUUUN song, Dajena!!! 😀
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Very moving poem. Really like the use of the elements, the wind whispering comfort, the water healing, and it all builds up to that powerful last line. Superb, Rosema!
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yaaay! your words are truly my heart’s delight, Jade! 🙂 Thank you!
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Jade, I am happy you agreed with what I commented 🙂
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Aside from the beautiful poem you created, I also learn new things from you, like that word “Tanka”. Thanks for sharing. 😀😀
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Awww! I am glad to share tanka with you. It is a lovely word. 🙂
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This is beautiful. Such devotion in each line! 🙂
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devotion. what a lovely word. 🙂 Thank you dear!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Nice tanka using the prompt. I love tankas 🙂
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yay! Thank you! I love them too! 😀
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love it!
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Thank you, Ipsita! 🙂
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These words render me speechless. This is such a powerful poem, so much emotion and feeling. Just wow…
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Geeez. You are just the sweetest, Kay! Thank you very much! ❤
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Ah! Such a lovely one … In love with this one !! ❤ ❤
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awwww! thank you for the love, Srivi! ❤
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Powerfully good–I want more!
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There will be more! ❤
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Yaaaayyyyy!
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🙂
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Wind and water sounds just for “holes” and other wounds caused by flames. A healing heart reaches toward a hurting heart. Sounds like love. Great crafting, Rosema!
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” A healing heart reaches toward a hurting heart.” Wow. Wow. That’s so poetic! Thank you, Christopher!
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(let me try the first part again) Wind and water sound just RIGHT for “holes” and other wounds . . .
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It is okay, Christopher. I get it. 😉 ❤
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