Isn’t

broken-bridge

A poem
without
a rhyme
is complete.

But a me
without
you,
isn’t.

©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.

Photo credit: Tom Butler


In response to Daily Post: Incomplete.

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34 thoughts on “Isn’t

  1. The broken dock looks sad. A good metaphor for feeling incomplete. As a peer, I’m happy for your reinforcing the notion that poems don’t need rhymes. The second part of the verse reads like an equation whose factors are math-like thinking and love.

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  2. This is perfectly true. We can be complete with ourselves and really, before we can truly love another we must first love ourselves.

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