tattered by sand and mud,
kissed by shrapnels and bombs,
we are always ready
to fight, to shot, to combat.
shined until twinkling as stars,
worn to exude power and class,
we are as high as timeless sky,
ready to slay a gal or guy.
made as comfy as a cloud,
displayed as chic, never proud,
we sneak and squeak in right amount,
as we dance, run, twist, and squat.
i am but bare, no thread, no leather,
just muscles and skin,
such fragile matters,
yet i am but your steps’ master
moving forward or back.
soldiers, executives, hippies,
humans, oh, i know their tracks.
whatever cover they clothed me,
expensive, bare, or just an old sack,
as long as they are chasing
their life’s purpose and meaning,
instead of becoming zombies sleepwalking,
that will be more than, oh, more than enough.
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Inspired by this favorite quote of mine:
“So many people walk around with a meaningless life. They seem half-asleep, even when they’re busy doing things they think are important. This is because they’re chasing the wrong things. The way you get meaning into your life is to devote yourself to loving others, devote yourself to your community around you, and devote yourself to creating something that gives you purpose and meaning.”
― Mitch Albom, Tuesdays with Morrie
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Wonderfully written from ground level, form the soles/souls of shoes! You’ve given them their tongues! I particularly enjoyed:
‘made as comfy as a cloud,
displayed as chic, never proud,
we sneak and squeak in right amount’.
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thank you, Kim! i hope i did justice to your prompt. 🙂
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Definitely!
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thank you!
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You’re on a roll! This is just fantastic!
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awww. you are sweet, sweetie di! thank youuuuuuuu!
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I liked these lines: “we are as high as timeless sky,
ready to slay a gal or guy”
Pursuing one’s life purpose is better than becoming “zombies sleepwalking”, another nice phrase.
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thank you for highlighting those lines, Frank!
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I love the purpose you describe in that walk… wonder if shoes can help us, or they are there just to help us.
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i think it’s the last one. thank you, Bjorn!
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The follow up quote is SO true – I think so many people would need less therapy if they volunteered of their time … I remember my husband polishing his military shoes when we were first married – and I couldn’t believe HOW MANY different type of tennis shoes there were. I think I had one pair of tennis shoes. 🙂 How’s that for a reversal as women get blamed for having so many shoes usually.
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that is true. and wow. that’s a nice reversal. hehe. thank you for leaving your thoughts.
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Gorgeous poem Rosema. Very impactful, packs a punch. The contrast between the soldiers boots and high heels shining, and then sneakers and someone who doesn’t wear shoes (can’t afford) really drive hone your message. Shoes are beaitiful and functional as long as the person wearing them (or not) sees the meaning to life and beyond. Sees therecpurpose. Really great take, wonderfully done! ❤️
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wow, Mandi! you hit the target bullseye there. this is the comment i have been waiting for. thank you for reading it beyond what i can say. thank you!
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I’m glad it was the one you wanted. I really loved it. I do wish my iPhone or IPad would stop inserting typos where I’ve typed the right spelling 😉
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hehe. it’s okay 🙂
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Wonderful write, and Albom’s inspiration speaks volumes!
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thank you, Ms. Beverly! i love Mitch Albom a lot.
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I watched Mitch Albom being interviewed by Ophra Winfrey on her Super Soul Sunday program–it was great.
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oh i watched too! and i was crying hehe. Tuesdays with Morrie is my favorite book of all time.
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I’m glad you saw it, even if you cried–I still need to read that book…it’s on my list 🙂
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ah it is a very good book. 🙂 i love it to pieces. ❤
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I remember you recommended it to me ❤
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Yes i did 😊
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And it keeps popping up everywhere–I went to a thrift store today, and saw 2 copies!!
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yaaay! 😀 Tuesdays with Morrie everywhere! 🙂
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Yep 🙂 Hope you got my comment re new blog 🙂 ❤
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yes sissy! i replied 🙂
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This is wonderful. It packs a punch.
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oh thank you, Jacq!
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Lovely read Rosema. I liked the picture you used for this poetry, the words match them perfectly.
Cheers
MeenalSonal from AuraOfThoughts
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Thank you for reading and for the comment! 🙂
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