Departure: A Diamante*
Earth,
noisy, disturb,
screeching, moving, screaming,
tired, worn out, peaceful, silent
calming, sparkling, appeasing,
steady, laden,
Heaven.
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Word Inspiration: Sarah Doughty of Heartstring Eulogies (Thank you, Sarah!)
*Diamante or Diamond Poem
The Diamante or Diamond Poem is:
- a heptastich, (7 lines).
- often a shape poem, the poem when centered on the page creates the outline of a diamond.
- unmetered. The measure of the line is the words used.
L1 – a noun which is the opposite of the noun used in L7
L2 – 2 adjectives that describe L1
L3 – 3 verbs (present participle) that describe what L1 does
L4 – 4 nouns that are related to both L1 and L7 or nouns that both have in common
L5 – 3 verbs (present participle) that describe what L7 does
L6 – 2 adjectives that describe L7
L7 – a noun which is the opposite (antonym) of the noun used in L1
Oh, very nice!
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yay! thank you dear!
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Of course.
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❤
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Wow! Lovely! I will explore this pattern! 🙂
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yay! that’s awesome to know, Prab!
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Oh–wowowowowowowowowow!!! I love this–you did a marvelous job, Rosey!
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Geeeez! That’s a loooot of WOWs sissy! thank youuuuuu!
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I know, you WOW me 🙂
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aww. you are so sweet! 😀
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Blush, blush 🙂 How are you feeling?
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toothache’s a bit calmer. 😉 thank you to Him and to your prayers!
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Glad to hear it, dear heart–will keep the prayers flying up ❤
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thank you sissy! I finally was able to reply to your email. ❤
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Ok, I’ll have a look 🙂
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thanks sissy! got your reply!
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:):)
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Reading this is like breathing out then breathing in again. We start with Earth and all its sensations. They build, peak, then diminish. And we are left at Heaven.
Wonderfully meaningful journey you take us on, sister!
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oh wooow! Thank you, brother! Your words never fail to make my heart flutter. 🙂
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earth in a nutshell–I mean diamonte–very cleverly wrought!
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HAHAHA! thank you dear Mel! 😀
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You’re welcome 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Beautiful Diamente
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thank you, dear Mandi!
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