Tell Me: A Senryu
Can you hold my heart?
Or you’ll just break it in parts?
Please let me know.
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02.11.2016
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I write because I read. I read because I write.
Tell Me: A Senryu
Can you hold my heart?
Or you’ll just break it in parts?
Please let me know.
—
02.11.2016
©2016 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo credit: Unsplash
Oh wow. 💕
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yay! thank you, Sarah! 😀 😀 😀
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Of course!
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❤
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“I hope you’ll say
You’ll love me every day
Please let me know.”
-Your poem inspired a little something 🙂
Such great poetry coming from you as always, my friend!
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oh wooooooooooooooooooooow!!! GEEEZ! Can I post this side by side my poem? Like an impromptu collab??? Is it okay with youuuu? 😀
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Of course you can Rosema! Lol, I’ll reblog it when I see it 🙂 Glad you liked it!
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ooooh! Then I’ll do it! 😀 😀 I’ll ping back dear to let you know. 😉
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Simple as in truth. Complex as in love.
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oooooh… love it, Christopher!
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Thanks! The thoughts come from your work.
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🙂 thank youuu!
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My first instinct would be to say. Give me a chance to see. Don’t outright ask, it’s a big burden. But if you are with that person and get to know them and love them, it’s the best responsibility of all. Not to mention, the other person holds your heart too.
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Oh. Those are points well made, Mandi! I agree. 🙂 Love is somehow a shared task, a shared responsibility. 😉
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Yeah, it’s confusing though at times too. Sometimes you need the words like you say.
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that is true. Sometimes you need assurance. 😉
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Wow!
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yay! thank you, Vikey! 😀
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Running to put cushion under, so heart does not break! 🙂
Lovely senryu Enchanting Ema! ❤
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geeez! thank youuuu! I have to note that tip of you, darling Dajena! 😉
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xoxoxo 😀 love to you!
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love back to youuu! ❤
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❤ ❤
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it’s not sleep time yet, my dear? 😀
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❤ I am on vacation 🙂
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ooooh a vacation!!! that’s awesome!
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Yes, two months and a half 🙂
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yay! that’s awesooome!
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🙂 do teachers have less vacation time at home?
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oh i am not sure! 😀 😀 😀
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Hold, of course. 🙂
Short and sweet. 🙂
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Hi there! 🙂 Thank you for your lovely comment! 🙂
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Hey.
You’re most welcome. 😊
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Yay! Nice e-meeting you here. If you won’t mind, may i know how you found my little blog? 🙂
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The feeling is mutual.
I was reading another blog, saw your comment there, so directed myself to read your blog.
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oh. thank youuu! 😀
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You’re welcome. 😊
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it was great knowing you! 😉
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Likewise. 😊😊
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Of course, hold it. No breaking it at all 🙂 ❤
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awwww! that’s so sweet of you! ❤ Thank you, NJ!
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❤ ❤ ❤ Love and smiles, always, dear Rose
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back to you, dearest!!! ❤ ❤
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I’ll hold it close to mine,
I swear.
No broken pieces
Or tears.
Hugs dear! I love it! ❤❤❤
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Oh geeeez! This piece give this poem some hope, some light! ❤ ❤ ❤ Thank you my romantic dearie!
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Same goes for you dear!! ❤❤❤
P.S. Sent you an email dear. Kisses!
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Yay!! Will be reading asap!
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dearie. i’ll post this a collab, alright? 😀
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Oh wow! Sure dear!! ❤️
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I’ll post this as a collab. HAHAHA
So my fingers are running and they missed a word! HAHA
Thanks, dearie! 😀
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Hahaha! Being OC againnnnn dearie!! 😀
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i can’t help it! so help me. HAHA. Chareng lang! 😀
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Hahahaha! Okay lang yan.. 😆
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😀 😀 😀
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what a note! I hope you put your own heart back together. I have learned that no one can heal a heart except the heart’s owner. Healing has to be internal thing. Otherwise the heart will be weak and forever dependent on others to hold it together and that’s no way to live. I address this idea a lot in my fantasy. I have a lot of broken characters and they stay broken until they decide to fix themselves. It helps when the character in question has a small child who holds up the pieces and asks when his father’s going to get around to fixing himself.
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That is so true. Healing, somehow, is a choice. A decision that lies in the hands of the heart’s owner. 😉 That is true! The nameless babe healed Undreal or Undeem (did i remember it right? )? That adorable baby led her from dark to light.
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Yes the baby did 🙂 She still has some internal work she needs to do but she has a motivating factor, that baby who refuses to let me name him. Can I quote you? 🙂
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Yeah. the picky babe! 😀
Yes, sure! 😉 😉 😉
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🙂 I’m sure there’s a reason behind his pickiness. He just hasn’t let me know what that reason is!
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Yeah! I guess so! 😀 His name should have something to do with his pickiness and his adorable mysteriousness!
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It should! Though I have a feeling he always has a name and that’s why he’s rejecting all the ones proposed.
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ooooooooh! i am excited for the official launch of his name! 😀
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🙂
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Nice poem! I sure hope he doesn’t break your heart!
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geez! thank you, dear! 😀 😀 😀 He hasn’t. 😉
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No, I meant the guy in the poem. LOL!
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Oh yeah! HHAHAHA
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Hahaha!
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😀 😀 😀
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Oh My!!! …. Such a beautiful poem this is… Simple words but oh-so-very-powerful!!!!!!
Loveeeed it!!! ❤ 😍
Hugs 😘
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YAAAY! Thank you dear Srivi! I am loviiiiiiiing your comments! 😀
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Ha ha 😀 My pleasure dear ❤ ❤
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😀 😀 😀 thank you again!
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Loved this! Great post, Rose 🙂
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yay! thank you!
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You’re welcome, Rose 🙂
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[…] you for continuing this little poem, […]
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I love it. And just to let you know, I wasn’t sure if I had Followed you or not–so I clicked, then it looked like I’d unFollowed, so I clicked again…maybe I’m going crazy today 🙂
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HAHA! That is okay, sissy! 😉
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