FordVerse: Tuesday Poetics: Fay Collins revisited. – Wrote a haiku for this painting by Fay Collins. As a tropical woman born in the lovely Philippine archipelago, I have been missing my home country’s salted water and pristine sand. Praying for homecomings next year.
A Reading Writer 
a very etherial feel to this one Rosma, do hope you get home soon. My brother was locked out over there, in the Philippines …
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Awww…hugs Rosie…sana makauwi ka na
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Love the joy in this one — sinking into bliss 🙂
Pax,
Dora
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oh thank you, Dora. blessings and love.
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…into oblivion….so powerful….well done
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oh yes, Ain. thank you!
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I love how so many wrote about the seaweed or kelp beneath… it feels like a pull into death.
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yes. that’s how i saw it, too. like Hades claws of some sort. thank you, Bjorn.
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This is beautifully deep and poignant! 💝💝
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thank you, dear Sanaa!
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Those still waters can be dangerously inviting!
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i cannot agree more, Ingrid. but sometimes they are really kind. 🙂
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That red in the middle of your poem is so unexpected, Rosema – I was startled by it.
❤
David
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thank you for noting that detail, David. 🙂
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