Four houses inside a red gate – dwarfed by the acacia tree beside it. Murmurs upon murmur, they wait like masked bees waiting for the sting of the queen.
“So if all do their duty, they need not fear harm.“
Not in the 21st century when a hollowed neck meant for a lover’s head can be filled with a knee until breath becomes missing air, when a simple hug means death sometimes.
The door creaks. A man looking like he visited the moon came out with a head bowed. Murmurs stopped as held inhales welcomed the still body in zippered bag.
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ouch powerful writing Rosema, you’ve packed a heck of a punch in only 144 words!
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thank you, Kate. can’t help but let this out. too much deaths to take.
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writing it out is so cathartic! but look after yourself please in these tough times, lots of love and hugs
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so so true. you, too, dear. much love and hugs back!
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take care, lots of love 🙂
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back at you!
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I feel like each of your paragraphs is a painting… your piece makes me think of a triptych, Rosema. How beautiful.
❤
David
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Learned a new word from you, David! Triptych. So humbled that this piece made you think of this art. Thank you heaps.
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This is chilling, and sadly evocative of what we have seen of the 21st century so far!
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that’s the sad reality, Ingrid. hoping things are turning for the better. sigh. thank you!
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You’re welcome. I hope so too!
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So much to love in this story of unjust death.
” a hollowed neck meant for a lover’s head can be filled with a knee”… says it all.
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indeed, Bjorn. such sad times. i hope you are well and safe. thank you!
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This is simply awesome …..
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thank you, Helen!
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Powerful! I can only imagine the history books to come….
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already feeling for the kids who will study the beginning of 21st century. sigh. thank you for reading, Mish.
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“a hollowed neck meant for a lover’s head can be filled with a knee until breath becomes missing air, when a simple hug means death sometimes,”.. this is incredibly hard-hitting and poignant! A gem of a prose piece! 💝💝
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oh wow. thank you for highlighting that part and for your ever kind words, Sanaa. ❤
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Okay, wow. The power this holds.
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Thank you!!
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Very powerful and sorrowful words, Rosema. You have painted a realistic and vivid picture. The heartbreak must be faced. Much love, MW 🙏
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indeed, MW. indeed. thank you so much. and i hope you are well.
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I’m enjoying the cooler weather. Wishing you a peaceful and pleasant week. 🥰
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thank you, MW! wishing same to you. 🙂
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Ouch! That packed a punch straight to my heart. Great vivid imagery on display as always within your work.
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thank you for your kind words, my friend. God bless you!
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You’re utmost welcome, and may God’s peace wrap around your heart like a blanket.
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to your heart, too, dear ❤
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