Three chili plants remaining, I once thought they would succumb after I almost drowned them with neem oil because of pesky ants. Together in a pot, amidst many stormy nights, it’s always a surprise when I see them breathing in silent delight. Yes, with wrinkled leaves, but at least, still alive.
But these clouds are clearly foreign, such an exotic clutter against the blue cloth of the sky. Too fleeting yet free of roots, wandering without being lost. For once, I want to climb on their soft back, albeit sunburn, just to taste the spice of freedom.
Maybe after life.
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Very stunning, especially that ending!
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thanks a lot, Lucy!
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“wandering without being lost” is a freedom I long for as well! Great write!
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ahhh. me, too. maybe someday, Tricia. Thank you!
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Welcome! 🌺
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powerful prose, ” just to taste the spice of freedom” really appeals. Feeling your frustration, hopefully we will be free again one day …
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hopefully, dear Kate. till then let’s keep ourselves safe. 😀 thank youuuu
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always a pleasure Rosema!
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“Just to taste the spice of freedom” really makes me wonder about this person’s story. So well done!
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thank you for spotting that line, Merril 🙂
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You’re very welcome! 😀
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😀
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I can feel the contrast between the confinement of the chili plant (alive) and the wish to ride the back of clouds. To me, this is a dream of a wish for Covid restriction to cease
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aha. you have keen eyes, Bjorn. happy to see you again and i hope all is well on your end.
thank you!
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Hmm, the ending was certainly thought-provoking.
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thank you so much, my friend!
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You’re welcome! 💙
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Very lovely analogies!
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Thank you!!
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This line is wonderful
‘just to taste the spice of freedom” 💕☺️
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i think it’s a crowd favorite. ;D thank you, Christine!
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Yes, I can see that now I’m reading the comments. There is a saying I think that variety is the spice of life, but I think Freedom fits it much better. Well done! ☺️
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oh yes. got to agree to that. thank you again, Christine!
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I loved the whole thing, and especially the title – that’s clever 🙂
❤
David
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thank you for noticing the title, David! i wonder if they get sunburnt! 😀
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