Five decades of wandering, in every step perhaps your heels planted seedlings of words, of love, of wisdom, of life. So much of your history remains a hidden story. We’re you a slave, a samurai, a cook, a poet, or everything and more? We can read scrolls after scrolls but never can we know.
A beautiful name you gifted yourself, Basho, after your beloved word-artist Li Po which carries the tart taste of a white plum. But no, plum did not win over your favourite plant — banana. In 17 syllables you have transformed a pair of cotyledons to a blooming spring’s cherry blossom of poetry. Until Autumn came to dry your ink in a field of golden, lifeless weeds.
short fifty years of
singing cuckoos, sorrowed snows,
timeless lines remain.
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Wow a tasty mouthful of Basho, identity, character and passion of his mastery fits snugly into your haibun
Much💙love
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that’s such a lovely comment. thank you, Gillena!
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What a lovely reflection on a great writer.
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Thank you, Sarah!
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A wonderful tribute to the haiku master! Well done!
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Thanks a lot, Frank!
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I agree with the other comments, and this is beautifully and thoughtfully written!
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i am grateful you think so!
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Your use of sibilant (s) sounds here is effective, sister. I’m also drawn particularly to your matching of sorrow with snow. I appreciate the contrast between mortality and what is timeless.
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ah! only you can spot the “s” effect i did, brother. thank you so much!
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I love how you captured so much of Basho’s poetry and how the season affects you…
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ah thank you, Bjorn. that part inspired Basho’s last known words.
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Wow, quiet and subtle perfection, Sister.
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oh how kind you are to me, sissy. thank you so much!
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Always sincere, you know that, dear little sister ❤
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Basho would be so delighted to read this..
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aww. so kind of you, Mich!
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