My heart saw you before my eyes
How beautiful is it, right?
Like nightingale, I heard your song
like moon-sent, sweet goodnight.
From miles away I felt you long
before our nervous hands touch.
Tonight listen to my soul’s notes,
they are for you, my far love.
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©2019 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo via Unsplash
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For dVerse OpenLinkNight #256
Excerpt from my poetry collection Poems for S, available in Kindle and paperback here: https://amzn.to/2CSrGAU .
A Reading Writer 
Beautiful. I conjured my husband by singing Steve Winwood’s Higher Love a lot.
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That is so sweet of you. Thank you for leaving your thoughts here. 🙂
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The beginning of this. The heart seeing before the eyes. That’s beautiful.
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oh thank you. it feels heaven, indeed. ❤
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A beautiful love poem Rosema, celebrating a soul connection. I love how the heart can see before the eyes 🙂💜
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Oh thank you! Your comment is bullseye! soul connection indeed! ❤
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My pleasure! 🙂💜🙋♀️
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Very nice… I can very much relate to this well crafted piece – we’ve all been there at one time in our life.
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I am happy it resonated with you. Thank you!
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I like how you described this communication between lovers who are far apart.
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Oh. I am grateful you liked it, Frank. 🙂
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The first two stanzas “sing” especially well. The last phrase “my far love” is creative and full of feeling in three words.
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Ah! Thank you for reading the song of this poem, Christopher! And that phrase, I love the most, too. 🙂 Have a blessed week, brother!
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Very beautiful. 💙
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Awww. Thank you so much, dear Diana!
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You’re most welcome!
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Such a touching and romantic love letter
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I am glad you find it romantic. Thanks a lot, Phillip!
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I love the sense of a love bridging distance… (actually I know how it can grow over distance)
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Oh yes, it truly does! Thank you, Bjorn!
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So sweet. And congrats on the publication! All the best.
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Thank you so much, Grace! ❤ I also finally found the 2017 anthology of dVerse. Maybe toooo late but I am excited to get a copy soon!
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