snowdrops and broken hearts: a monorhyme*

Pluck one, and then two,
hold those tears, though true,
“He loves you not.” Chew

perished juice— his rue.
Pluck three, four, five. Phew.
Let him go. Adieu.

Enough of flower’s woo,
your chapter is through.
Spit the seed ‘side you.

Beside your window’s view,
sink yesterday’s blue,
water with hope’s brew.

Wait for spring’s hue
where snowdrops grew.
Pluck not, rebirthed. New…

11.28.2019
©2019 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo by Urban Prah on Unsplash
For dVerse Poetics: Sylvia and Ted.
The challenge is to write a poem in the format and style of either Plath or Hughes. It must be about something that grows or multiplies and is in some way invasive.
I picked Plath’s format: Plath’s lines are very short, with nearly every line consisting of five syllables; Plath’s poem is arguably feminine in tone.
I also used the monorhyme format – which means all lines are rhyming. 🙂

10 thoughts on “snowdrops and broken hearts: a monorhyme*”

  1. I love the title and that you have emulated Plath’s poem. A sadness seeps into the lines, evoked by the ‘oo’ rhymes, the idea of ‘perished juice’ and the lines:
    ‘Beside your window’s view,
    sink yesterday’s blue’.

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