High-pitched
giggles of sparrows
no longer echo
inside the cave
of my ears
before the kraa kraa
of your crows
disrupt your evening’s
fiction dreams.
Yet what a gift
that despite
our clock’s
different schemes
your early
and my early
daily meet
in between.
Being well acquainted with time zones and jet lag I identify with the voice here. It’s all very good but the two times meeting in the middle speaks to me of effort to make the time zone valley work. And if I missed it, it spoke to me. Good job. Thanks for writing so true.
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You nailed the meaning, and I am more than delighted that you did. Thank you so much!
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Yes, all is experience and perception.
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I cannot agree more, Ma’am! Thank you!
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I love the birds, and the affection here.
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Awww. Thank you so much, Sarah!
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time can’t keep some hearts apart – this was sweet and loved your two early’s at the end – made me smile Rosie!
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Awwww. That is so true, Gina! Hearts are stubborn like that. 😊
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heehee, i like the stubborn hearts that fight for love – you write this so well
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Hehe. Im stubborn myself.😅
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Love the juxtaposition of the sparrows’ giggles and the crows’ kraa kraa – very effective sound effects. This could be dVerse poets with our ‘clock’s different schemes’. I love the final stanza!
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Awww. That means a lot to me, Kim! I cannot stop smiling! Thank you so much!
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At, always so lovely!
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Oh thank youuuuu so much, love!
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This made me smile. 😄
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Yay! I am glad to know that, Diana! How have you been?
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I’m good at the moment, thanks. I trust that things are great on your end.
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It’s crazy but still good. 🙂
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😄💙
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Time zones…lovely. Early and late intersect.
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Ah yes. You got it! Thank you, Mary!
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One of the best I have read from you. The beauty of this is simplicity. With a constraint of 44 words, the magic that you have woven for me brings me down to happy tears. Our clocks might have different schemes, but they beat in the same rhythm, the rhythm of our love :*
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Oh maaaaaan. Someone is stealing the show! 😍😍😍 Im proud to say that my beloved is a poet himself. 😍😍😍
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Awwwww 😍😍. We both will run the show, together, until we are alive
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Yes, indeed. 40 years and more. 😘
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I love the many implications of this – especially that despite time difference, our “early” meets.
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Yes. When two hearts want. They can. 😊
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I love this so much ..i can totally relate with the time zone difference..
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Aww..i hope love will always be stronger than time zones. 🙂
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Nice last stanza with the two earlies meeting in between.
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Thank you so much, Frank!
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Awww, a super sweet take on a long-distance love, this is truly a poem that makes one smile and understand that sometimes, true love extends past one’s country and spans across oceans ❤
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Yes. If love is true, its capacity is beyond human made borders and divides. 😊 Thank you, dearie!
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Exsquisite! Love your closing stanza, especially:
your early
and my early
daily meet
in between.
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Aww. Thank you, Frank!
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😇
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Early or late it’s all in the perception of time or in this case time zones.
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Yes. That is so true. Thank you!
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I so agree with you. Wherever we are, being early or late is relative.
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Yes. Indeed, Grace. Thank you!
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Lovely as ever, you’re a woman of vast talent. And I’m so thrilled and proud that your book is a success!! ❤ God bless you, Sissy 🙂
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Awww. Sissy! Another new house for you. Thank youuuu so much!
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You must think I’m SO Crazy, haha–but I love you too much to not let you know where I am ❤ ❤ ❤ How are you??
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I am so so so much happy when you are around. 😊😊😊 thank you so much for coming back. 😘😘😘 I am working double job now sissy. God has been good by sustaining me with strength. How about my beloved sissy?
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Oh my goodness, Sister–2 jobs!! I will be praying extra for your strength and peace. Do you have time for emails? Probably not, haha! I have things to share–but not in comment box. However, I’ve begun preparations for the holiday season–I made a beautiful seashell and bead Christmas wreath. I’ve never been good at “crafts”, but this turned out so well–I’m really pleased!! 🙂 LOVE YOU MUCHLY!!! ❤
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Yaaaaay for holidays preparation! Please email, sissy! Ill find time fkr you and Im excited to know more about you! 😊😊😊 i have the same email so just shoot me one, okay! 😊 thank you for the prayers! Hugs hugs
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Love you MUCH! ❤
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ill check soonest, my sissy looove! ❤
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Take your time ❤
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Oh sissy. I have a looot to say to youuu. Ill try to sneak sometime today. ❤ love youuu!
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As lovely as Rosema herself, well done!
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Awwee.. my dearie is so in love ❤
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Eeeeeeep. 🙈🙈🙈 yes, dearie. Umay na ba? 😂
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Hindi oyyyy! We want more. ❤
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Hahahaha! Salamat, dearie!
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You had me at “High pitched giggles of sparrows”. I like the way you found a common place of meeting within the distance, bringing normality and hope. I have lived the LDR and happy that we are now under the same roof. 🙂
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Oh dear. You never know how much your revelation made me soooo hopeful. I am so happy for you! 😊 Thank you, Mish!
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