While I was walking home,
someone called my name.
A genderless body
wearing a sunny smile,
a mist-kissed scent,
and a sunset orange glow.
“Hello, my name is love.
I know I might be hard.
But would you come
with me, tonight?”
Before my surprised tongue
could let a word roll out,
another face came,
wearing the blanket of
a pitch black night,
and the smoke of
a melting rubber
on its upward flight.
“Hey, I am hate.
No, don’t hesitate.
I am an easier
company, mate.”
My unsure feet
step back, one…
and then two…
Inhale and exhale,
my choice is due.
I’d rather be fried
under a sun angry
with love,
than sip
whiskey under
a calm moon
without love.
—
08.03.2018
©2018 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo via Unsplash
For dVerse Unseen Things.
True. Wisely chosen, but it’s not always so easy for everyone, the choice, yk
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Yes. I think I have acknowleged that fact in the poem. Thank you for reading!
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This is beautiful
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Lovely ending! If you substituted red wine for whiskey I might have a harder choice though 🙂
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Haha. I should have seen this. 😁 Thank you, Jane!
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Just keep the wine locked up 🙂
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Sure! 😁
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Lovely contrast and beautiful ending.
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Oh thank you, Jacq!
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I love the subtle touches of detail in this poem, such as:
‘a mist-kissed scent,
and a sunset orange glow’
and
‘wearing the blanket of
a pitch black night,
and the smoke of
a melting rubber
on its upward flight’.
Wise decision!
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Thank you for noticing them, Kim! 🙂
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Very beautiful description of both the emotions. It is better to get roasted under love’s sun.
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I cannot agree more! Thank you, Vandana!
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I love the contrast and how you ended it .
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Mich!! Thank you so much! How have you been?
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Been so damn busy Rose hahahaha….life..lol..
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Haha. Understood, Mich. Powerhuuuugs to youuuu!
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We moved abroad Rose…hahahahha
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Woooooah!!!! Where????
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Out of the country Rose…will email you details who knows you get to travel here…so let me know
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Ohhhh. Im excited for youuu
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And this goes into the list of the “best” that I have seen coming from your unbelievable mind filled with outworldly poetic prowess. How can you even think of writing in such a rhythm. I am amazed today. Already short of words. Embraces the poetess tightly and kisses forehead
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Awww. It is a delight to my heart to receive your words and know what you think of what I write. You muse me, my love.
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I love these opposite of strong emotions… but maybe there is an even worst place… the grey mansion of indifference blocking both the specters out.
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Ahhhhh. Grey mansion of indifference sounds so chilling!
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Delightful form and use of voice. Terrific!
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Thank you, Jilly!
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Wonderfully imagery and inticing use of personification! Love it!
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Oh, thank you so much, Frank!
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My pleasure! 😇
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unseen decisions – choices between the sun and moon, love and unloved. Sometimes, it might ease the pain to sip whiskey under the moon when love has left one heartbroken
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That is true. Life has different seasons. Thank you!
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Interesting choice between those versions of love and hate.
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Thank you, Frank!
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With hate you focus on making others suffer, but you have no rest, with love you will suffer but may find meaningful joy. This was a treacherously beautiful path you wrote. Nicely done.
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Those are wise words. Thank you so much!
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Good choice! LOVE all of this and most especially the last stanza!
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The contrast was well written and the ending was superb! 👍
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Awww. Your words are delight to my heart. Thank you!
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My pleasure, Rosema. 💙💙
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😊
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Such a fascinating parable or metaphorical story. Maybe more a proverbial story, I’m not sure, but the ending is strong in that for the speaker, life without love is worth getting burned by it. That takes strength for sure.
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I cannot agree more. Thank you for a profound comment, Mandi!
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