Clothed pair of soles
dressed in faux leather top
and synthetic rubber pants,
clanking, clanking,
against the cobbled,
sometimes cemented
concrete jungle paths,
dreams to be
bare and naked
against the foliage
of the fallen petals
of Autumn trees,
ready and brave
to be pricked with
the crisp and thin
sun-dried twigs,
for the slave feet of the city
yearns to be the lost queen
of the wild—
the sanctuary
of the soul’s respite.
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Wonderful sound pattern in your wild poem!
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that’s an equally amazing comment. thank you!
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Loved it:)
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thank you!
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I really like the contrasts you created between nature and all that faux clothing – hobbled on the cobbles
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hobbled on the cobbles indeed. Thank you, Laura!
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The wild may mean being “pricked with
the crisp and thin
sun-dried twigs” and that may be preferable to being “slave feet”.
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definitely better, Frank! thank you so much!
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Love Slave feet of the city & lost Queen of the wild! What a precisely written poem – so glad you joined in.
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yay! thank you so much! Happy to be back in dVerse!
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“slave feet of the city” – wonderful phrase and wonderful poem!
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Thank you, Jo!
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The slave feet of the city just danced through your poem. Thank you!
Cheers,
Mark
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Oh wow. Thank you, Mark!
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This is soooooooo beautiful. Sooooo beautiful. Your paint with words in a way that no one can. And the most interesting thing is that this is so free flowing, like a river, so musical, so lyrical, like a well rehearsed ensemble. Soooo proud of you, mahal ko! Always!
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Awww. salamat mahal ko. I love you a lot! ❤
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This poem builds in pace and strength of words, until the powerful conclusion regarding “the slave feet of the city.” Sister, this is impressive art and skill!
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yay! thank you so much, brother! Finally found some time to get back in. (while sick) I hope you’ve been well!
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Loved it , very atmospheric !!
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Thank you! 🙂
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Wow. This is wonderful! “Slave feet of the city yearns to be the lost queen of the wild.” Delicious turns of phrase.
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Yay! Thank you so much, MW! 😀
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Sister, this is really good. The line “for the slave feet of the city” is powerful! The themes of wild and sanctuary are important. To be both free and safe–what a wonderful lifestyle to have! I hope you are really well.
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Yay! Thank you so much, brother! I am quite fond of that line too! 🙂
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