Know the meaning of brave, break.
Learn the meaning of love, lose.
Swallow your unsaid words, breathe.
Think death is coming soon, live.
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03.26.2018
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In response to Blogging from A to Z Challenge and NaPoWriMo 2018.
V is for Vakh.
Vakh (Sanskrit – “speech” interpreted by some as “verse teaching”) is a 14th century stanzaic form, originated by a woman poet, Lalla-Devi or Lallashwari, a Kashmiri Shaivite mystic and Sufi saint. 258 poems by Lalla were preserved in this form ranging from songs, proverbs and prayers. This form is found among the earliest Kashmiri literature and records when the Kashmiri language emerged from a descendant of Sanskrit.
The elements of the Vakh are:
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a tetrastich, a poem in 4 lines although it has occasionally been found in a couple of stanzas of 4 lines.
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syllabic, lines of 7 syllables each, with 4 stresses per line.
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occasionally rhymed with true or near rhyme.
Masterpiece filled with a strong message 😍😍
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yay. thank you! 😀
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I agree, this verse is strong. Break to know the meaning of brave. Lose to know love. Swallow and then breathe. Death is coming–so live. Tough and true and smart, sister!
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yay! always grateful for your feedback, brother! Ill drop by on your poems soonest!
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Good finale. Yes LIVE
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indeed!
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