frozen minutes (a kasa)

Blushed cheeks can’t lie, heartbeat races.
Just a second, just your faint smell,
enthralled moment, frozen minutes.
Though you’ll hold her, instead of me.

03.23.2018
©2018 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
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In response to Blogging from A to Z Challenge and NaPoWriMo 2018.
K is for Kasa.
The Kasa, (song-words) the elements are:
  1. syllabic, 7-syllable lines broken by caesura into alternating groups of 3 and 4 syllables or 8 syllable lines broken by caesura into equal 4 syllable phrases.
  2. strophic which can vary in number of lines.
  3. tends to describe or expose through parallels.
  4. written from unrequited love, patriotism, daily life, nostalgia, etc.

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10 thoughts on “frozen minutes (a kasa)”

    1. i really appreciate you, Andrew! thank you for reading and commenting. these are all scheduled posts hehe. so sorry for the late feedback and my absence. will catch up on your poems, too! grateful for you!

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