More shots fired,
bang! bang!
Another mug
overflowed with
blood, blood. Blood
from veins of the
innocents. Veins
pulsing, asking,
why oh why,
again? Till when,
oh please, till
when? Who
turned on the
faucet of this
intoxicating hate?
How many
pills of love, should
the orphaned
earth take to end
this bloody hangover?
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Author’s Note: The prompt today was about “drinking”. And because I don’t drink (alcoholic drinks, or even wines, never had, never will :D), these lines leaked just like that.
For the lives ended by war, violence, depression, hate, this is my futile attempt to write an elegy for you.
Guns don’t kill people. People kill people. It’s one sad truth we witness every single day.
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Love this very much! Sobering!
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Thank you, Mary!
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Well-written. While it’s true that people kill people, guns are far too accessible to those who kill…America is gun-crazy.
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Well done! Spoken for all of us. I love how you compare alcohol with hate and the effects that come as a result.
Dwight
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Thank you so much, Dwight. it’s just sad.
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Great enjambment… it’s indeed like a hangover.
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a very bad one for that matter. thank you, Bjorn!
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It’s really hard for the rest of the world to understand the American relationship with guns. It seems to be a national addiction, an idea you play with well.
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That is a sad truth. Sigh. Thank you, Sarah!
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A powerful write and a question for those who are drunk on gun love to ponder.
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Indeed. Thank you, Paul!
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This is wonderful and as others have said, very powerful!
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Thank you so much, PJ! My heart breaks for those 17 souls lost yet again. And the many more that are not being broadcasted. sigh
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That is so sad when children kill our children. Schools should be safe but they are not. We live in a very different world now Rosey.
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That is a very sad truth. It’s really heartbreaking. If only we can discover an antidote to all this. 😦
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You’re so right about that Rosey!
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sigh.
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This is very powerful, Rosema!
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Thank you, Diana!
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You’re welcome. 🙂
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❤
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Excellent write. How can people with histories of violence or pysch problems [purchase weapons.
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that i cannot understand too. sigh. thank you, Andrew!
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Heartfelt use of the prompt. Unfortunately, I don’t see an end to this bloody hangover.
Regards,
Mark
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That is indeed a sad reality. Sigh.
Thank you, Mark!
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Yes, we do love to romanticize intoxication, but eventually, all this state of mind does is lead to blood and tears.
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i cannot agree more. thank you!
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I like the phrases “pills of love” and “intoxicating hate”.
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Thank you so much, Frank!
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Rosema, first of all it’s great to see that you’re still here on WP. I just returned this week and was thinking about you just a little while ago. So pleased to see you in my reader.
Second of all, GREAT poem. Brillian job. I’m sensing that part of this at least has to do with even the ex-student that went to school and shot a ton of people in Florida. Am I right?
Blessings to you sweetie. 🙂 ❤
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Yaaaaaay! Hello there! Happy to see you again! How have you been??? I just came back to. Around two weeks ago. 🙂 Looking forward to read more from you again!
And yes, this is inspired by that Florida shooting. It’s really heartbreaking. 😦
Blessings back at ya! 😀
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Oh Rosema, I’m so sorry for taking so long to reply. I made my return to blogging at the wrong time. I was preparing and then teaching for an intensive 5-week ESL course. My time was so limited and I just couldn’t dedicate any time to blogging. I’m back now though, so I hope to be more regular now.
How are you doing?
🙂 ❤
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Yay! No worries. 🙂 It’s okay. I’m doing fine. Juggling work-writing and hobby-writing. 😀 Thank you so much! I hope you’re doing amazing!
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I am doing well, thanks. Just trying to organize my time.
Have a great day Rosema.
🙂 ❤
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Ah. I feel you. Thank you, Staci! Bless you!
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You leave me in awe at times. You are unselfish. You care about the planet. You care about its people. In an age, when all that people are concerned about is themselves, here is a poet who feels for the entire world and all its people, and wants to inject the world with some love shots. Proud of you. “Who turned on the faucet of this intoxicating hate?” This is such a sooperbly poetic line. God bless the world. God bless you. May hate end soon
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Your comment moved me to tears. Thank you so much, Mr. Roy. And indeed. I echo your prayer. Impossible. But hope is all we have. Hope and the power to spread love in ways that we can.
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This is amazing, love.
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awww. thank you so much, love! our world is fast becoming a sad place to live.
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