mummed magic

the scarlet leaf
of the almost bare autumn tree,
s  l  o  w  l  y , ever s  l  o  w  l  y ,
f
a
l
l
i
n
g
from its home twig
to its grave earth.

the crystal snowflake
of the heavy, winter cloud
g e n t l y , ever g e n t l y ,
d
e
s
c
e
n
d
i
n
g
from its throne in heaven
to its melting ground.

the brave sprout
of the fresh, spring seed
s o f t l y , ever s o f t l y ,
e
s
c
a
p
i
n
g
its cotyledons’ cave
towards the sky’s bright, open shade.

the soft, infant rays
of the smiling, summer sun
g e n t l y , ever g e n t l y,
b
u
r
s
t
i
n
g
into tiny sparkles of warmth
to kiss the waiting land.

these are earth’s mummed magic,
they need no noise to be majestic.

P.S. Is it evident that I fantasize about four seasons too much? 😀
09.06.2017
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In response to Magic by Paul of paul scribbles.
So my poetic pals, your task if you choose to accept it, is to pen a poem using the word MAGIC in some form or write a piece that is quite simply MAGICAL. You know you can.
dverse

48 thoughts on “mummed magic”

  1. Rose. This is pure extravaganza. I am stunned. Jaw dropped. Eyes opened wide. A sheen brushed past the cornea. The sensory delights that is served here is pure class. I can smell. I can hear. I can see the falling, the descending, all in Slow-Mo. Terrific! Keep it up

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    1. oooh. what a beautiful comment, Paul. Thank you! i brought Toni’s komorebi and your magic together. 🙂 And thank you for the link. it’s interesting how a word can mean a lot of different things. 🙂

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  2. I’m so glad I chanced upon your blog. This is so so beautiful. I love the effect you created with the cleverly crafted spacing of words like ‘falling’ and ‘descending’. I could almost see the leaf falling and the snowflakes descending. ❤

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  3. This is such a beautiful piece of art. I loved the effect you created with the cleverly crafted spacing of words like ‘falling’ and ‘descending’. I could almost see the autumn leaf falling and the snowflakes descending. Lovely visual imagery. Soothing yet powerful. ❤

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  4. I love how this is such a visual poem and the visual spreading out of words to go down letter by letter give you the image of leaves, snow falling etc, but also the image of the sound. Very clever Rosema, well done!

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