i wanna go where the mountains
are high enough to echo my song
song of the soul ceaselessly
gearing up to be strong,
strong enough to not
always try to belong,
belong to the world filled
with hazy right and wrong,
wrong or right, i just want
to live as if life is not long,
long enough to think
my tomorrows are like birdsongs,
birdsongs– sweet yet fleeting, soothing yet fading,
like the echo of my soul’s song.
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08.16.2017
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I love her music!
This is my favorite section of your poem:
“strong enough to not
always try to belong,
belong to the world filled
with hazy right and wrong”
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oh yes. India Arie. ❤ And thank you! 🙂
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What a lovely song – the echo and the birdsong.
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aaah. thank you, Bjorn!
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I love “ceaselessly gearing up to be strong.” She has a lovely, delicate voice. Very nice!
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Thank you! 🙂
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Oooh, you’re returning with gusto!! Lovely, lovely song ❤
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hehe. thank you sweetie! ❤
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I love the tomorrows like birdsongs.
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aww. thank you! 🙂
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A beutiful take on the prompt and the message is really timely…
So many rights…so many wrongs…leaving us all confused…
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i agree. the society is too wrecked to instil what is right and what is wrong. Thank you, Mich!
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**beautiful..
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awww. got it! 😀 thank you, Mich!
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A beautiful poem from a beautiful song.
“…i just want
to live as if life is not long,
long enough to think
my tomorrows are like birdsongs,
birdsongs– sweet yet fleeting, soothing yet fading,
like the echo of my soul’s song”
oh my yes!
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aww. thank you! 🙂 really appreciate you citing those lines. 🙂
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Beautiful!
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thank you dear PJ! ❤
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A wonderful poem and a lovely song, thank you for sharing :o) xxx
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thank you! 🙂
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Thank you for sharing! ❤
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awwww. thank you for appreciating this poem! 🙂
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Its really soul soothing. ❤
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thank you dear!
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Most welcome! 🙂
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‘My tomorrows are like birdsongs’ I love that image;
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Thank you, Jane! 🙂
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🙂
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Wow wow wow, Sister–you’ve crafted a fiercely beautiful piece.
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awww. you are ever kind. i value your words always, sissy love. ❤
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Good–because my words are rich with sincerity and LOVE ❤
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amen! amen!:)
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🙂 ❤
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I really like the overlaps you created throughout….a weaving of words. Beautifully written.
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Strong enough to not always try to belong, belong to the world filled with hazy right and wrong….Oh bestill my heart. Every line is achingly beautiful and fills me with a longing to soar with you… where tomorrows are like birdsongs.
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Such a delicate piece of writing for a deep subject matter.
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thank you for such deep thoughts, Paul. 🙂
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Someday come visit are beautiful Rocky Mountains. They are beautiful, pristine, and freeing. Wonderful writing as well.
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awww. i wish. i wish!!! thank you, Mandi!
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