he tried to give me
the kiss of eternity,
like a parched flower
he thought i need his shower,
but i don’t.
i felt my warm skin
against the cold wall,
as he pushed me deeper
to surrender my all,
but i don’t.
i sank, scratched my nails
against his back,
he tried to stop me
with a full-blown smack,
but i don’t.
before he gave
another strong blow,
i kicked hard
his tummy’s below,
yes, i do.
before my eardrums
cracked in his screams,
i pulled his gun’s trigger
and ended his dreams,
yes, i do.
for i am a woman
who doesn’t have a man,
but i won’t let anyone
to strip me to undone,
yes, i am.
now, ask me
if i am guilty,
of killing a monster
who could’ve killed me,
yes, i am.
—
06.14.2017
©2017 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo via Public Domain Photo
In response to Mugging for the Camera by
lillian.
Choose one of these mug shots from the 20s that “speaks to you.” Let your imagination go a bit wild for this prompt. You can be the person, talking to us; or put the person into a poetic “Wanted” poster. Or tell us a tale in verse that “spins” around the mug shot you select. You are limited only by the far reaches of your creativity! The one requirement is that you post the mug shot you choose, in addition to your “mug shot poem.” Surprise me! I’m looking forward to meeting some real characters!!!
Oh boy! Rosie, this… I… I… don’t even know what to say. *bows down again and again* This brought up every emotion possible in me.
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awwwww. my dear NJ. you are tooo sweet. your words never fail to make my heart swell in gratitude. thank you. bows back. bows back.
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This is so very well done….and complements the photo so well. Favorite lines include
he tried to give me
the kiss of eternity,
like a parched flower
and
i felt my warm skin
against the cold wall,
The poem is so visceral…I can feel so much of it in your words. I love the way it comes full circle from the title, through the refrains in similar words and brevity, and then the title again.
Thank you so much for posting and participating in the prompt!
The amazing thing about all these posts, and all the photos, is these were real people and you really wonder, what is her story? What is their story? What led to this mug shot and what happened after?
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You really did this woman justice. In the US we wouldn’t call that “guilty,” we would call it “self-defense.” You see? Now I think she is real and I am preparing for her defense trial! Good work!
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Intense.
really liked it!
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Oooohhh my dear Rosie..i didint know you have killer instinct…hahaha kidding aside…i love this..so powerful…so intense…so strong..
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awww. hehe. i do. i killed a lot nah. (hides) hehe. thank you dear Mich!
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This is my favorite part:
“as he pushed me deeper
to surrender my all”
Typically, people who abuse, were abused. It doesn’t justify, but it somewhat explains.
What I wonder is why so many people keep loving their abusers, as if that’s the best they think they deserve.
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Thank you for commenting. And i agree with you. maybe because it is out of fear. or they are shaded and cannot see that they are not loved.
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This poem engaged several of the senses. It showed, and felt, without resorting to telling. It’s raw and jagged. Awesome!
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oooh. raw and jagged. thank you, Charley! always enjoy your comments!
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She looks so demure in the photo, but the lady packs a punch. Great story!
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hehe. thank you, Beverly!
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Wonderful! The voice is perfect for the bowed head in the photo. Great poem!
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thank you, Jane!
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🙂
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We never know what lies beneath Rosema. Having met a few monster killers you capture the mood well.
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oooh. that means a lot. Thank you, Davy!
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Nice ending admitting guilt to killing a monster.
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thank you, Frank!
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I have no words for this piece. You always seem to outdo yourself with every poem you share with us. Superbly written.
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Her body language defends your portrait. And altogether possible, then or now.
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i agree. that is a sad truth. thank you, Walter!
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oh…my…this poem was very unexpected and oh…my….
Raw, powerful, and emotional.
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thank you, Charlie!
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A woman has to fight back and defend herself. Her body and whatever she does to protect it and her choice, is justified. Great message.
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i agree. thank you, Mandi!
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I’m blown away! Magnificent poetry.
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oh wow. thank you! 🙂
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Love how you have ended each stanza, and a good reason to get off the charges.
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i agree. thank you, Bjorn. 🙂
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“he tried to give me / the kiss of eternity,” How outrageous! What she did was perfect. I really like the honest, strong voice you’ve given to your character.
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thank you, Ma’am! I appreciate your comment. 🙂
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Wow! The intense in this piece and the strength of her character is just amazing. It’s a fitting story with a well deserved ending. The lines just sing inside my head.
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oh wow. sing in your head. that’s amazing. thank you! 🙂
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No problem!
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*shivers!* Oh my goodness, Rosema this is chilling to the bone! You weaved an amazing tale of revenge and strength.
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Wow, fierce!
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thank you, sissy love! 🙂
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Most welcome, dear heart ❤
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That was beautifully written. She isn’t guilty. She’s just a woman who saved herself. Such monsters like him deserve to die. Great job, Rosema.
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yay! thank you, Shweta!
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What did I just read? A masterpiece! A masterpiece that is such raw and exudes amazingness from every pore. The way you portray and play your words on such difficult scenarios is beyond comprehension. Probably that is what makes you one of my favorite poets
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hehe. thank you, Shubhodear! 😀
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You effectively brought the mugshot to life …and excellent case for self-defense!
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oooh. thank you, Lynn!
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Your words are so powerful; so precise and so well chosen, making your writing so moving! Wow, thank you for sharing this beauty with us ❤
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wow. thank you! i appreciate you.
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This was beautiful and brilliant. I felt so much for her.
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wow. thank you, Alison!
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Your poem captures this picture perfectly. Amazingly brilliant writing!
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awww. thank you dear Gilda! I am not sure if i have thanked you already for the Amazon review. and for purchasing my book. But thank you. so much! so much!
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Dearest Rosema, you have absolutely yes thanked me! And it was most definitely my pleasure to buy and write an honest review of your lovely book. I am just so very excited for you, so congrats again and best of luck. 🙂
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awww. thank you dear. it means a lot to me
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Only you…wow wow wow what a piece
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It is! I think it’s amazing. Thank you Devereaux.
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thank you! 🙂
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awww. too sweet. thank you!
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🙂
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wow. thank you!
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It was my pleasure. Congratulations on this extraordinary poetry!
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awww. thank you!
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I’m with Holly. I’m totally blown away, Rose. The emotions in this have me covered in goosebumps with the words ripping tearing and then shouting YES when she kills him. I’m stunned. Speechless. Powerful powerful portrayal of this woman. How so many women can relate …. wow!
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Wow. Thank you, Amy! I am humbled by your comment. Thank you!
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You are a powerful writer. I will enjoy reading more of your work. Thank YOU! 🌹
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oh my. thank you, Amy Rose. 🙂
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thank you!
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Wow! This is intense and goosebumpy.
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Yay! Thank you, Jacq!
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Powerful writing that evokes very strong feelings. So well done!
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Just stunning, Gorgeous work.
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thank you!
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