she got the final note
on her last day
on earth.
she went out
with a book on hand
and let the last echo
of her heart
lead her between
the mountain, the sky
where her song is heard,
where her name is whispered.
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P.S. Written with India Arie’s India Song playing. ❤
I wanna go where the mountains are high enough to echo my song
I wanna go where the rivers run deep enough to drown my shame
I wanna go where the stars shine bright enough to show me the way
I wanna go where the wind calls my name
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I adore those last lines, especially.
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thank you so much! ❤
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I liked how her last day on earth, which seems like a defeat, nonetheless led her to where her song is heard and her name is whispered.
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yes. you captured the poem clearly. 🙂 🙂
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Somehow I feel that if we ever leave that’s the way to go…
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I can hear the echo from here… ❤
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awww. ❤ ❤ ❤
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What a way to spend your last moment on earth Rosema, singing poetry to the world. Excellent poetry 🙂
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awwwww. cannot agree more! thank you for the kind words!
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Outstanding, Rosema! Such heart in this. Is speaks ethereal! Like this so much!
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awwww. such a lovely comment, Walter! Thank you!
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This is soo beautiful!❤️
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awww. thank you! 🙂
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❤ ❤
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It sounds like she was ready to fly. She had the required token or ticket (the book), and was waiting for her ride. At least that’s how it seemed to me. I hope her last day was a good one.
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awww. what a beautiful comment! I cannot thank you enough! 🙂
I think it will be a great one. ❤
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Thanks Rosemary, Bless you!
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bless you too! 🙂
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I love that last echo of her heart ~ She is a brave woman ~
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This is me one day. HAHA! Brilliant write ups Rose. 😛
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awwww. wag naman, Gly! ❤ hehe. thank you!
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Nice PHOTO ❤ ❤ ❤
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thank you!
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What a way for life to end. I wonder how it’ll be….
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awwwww. i agree. i wonder too
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This poem itself echoes, and it’s a tragic end but also an uplifting story of new beginnings 🙂
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awww. thank you for the lovely comment my dearie!
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