no matter
how many times
you ebb
away,
away,
away,
from me,
I am quite sure
you’ll always
come back,
come back,
come back,
come back,
to me.
– from shore to sea
—
04.18.2017
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Today, write us a postcard poem.
This can be as simple as penning a poem that is short enough to fit on a postcard (or cocktail napkin, or Post-it note). Think micropoetry. Or you have the option to add the challenge of writing a poem that is to, or from, someone, as if it were a note on an actual postcard. You can also choose a postcard image (one you own, or one you find online – just be sure to give credit where due), and use it as a visual prompt.
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Oh my! You are indeed a true magician of words ❤️❤️❤️
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awww. and you are indeed my sweetest dear NJ! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Nice rhythm to this.
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thank you, Paul! 🙂
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Lovely Rosema. I found myself singing this. You have captured that tidal feeling with the poem.
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awww. that’s the goal. to feel the ebb and flow hehe. thank you, Davy!
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Aw, this is the sweetest thing. ❤
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hehe. thank you, dearie! ❤
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Just beautiful. Such a gorgeous oceanic flow of words.
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awww. thank you! 🙂
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Nice postcard from the shore to the sea.
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thank you, Frank!
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That’s beautiful, Rosema. 😊
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thank you, Shweta!
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🙂
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The repetition really makes this poem shine. Just beautiful, dear.
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awww. thank you dearie!! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Brilliantly crafted poem with minimal word usage! in love with this one and of course, the great idea! cheers 🙂
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aww. thank you for the kind kind words! ❤
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Oh my goodness, Rosey–this is so wonderful!
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awww. thank you dear sissy! ❤
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Most welcome always ❤
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❤ ❤
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Reblogged this on Creative Writing Reblogged.
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Awwww, this is so sweet.
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Hope you are well Rosema, and please have a lovely weekend.
🙂 ❤
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yes i am. 😀 just a bit busy with work. 😀 😀 😀
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Tell me about it. I haven’t posted in about three weeks. Finally got one finished off today and sent out.
Have a lovely weekend Rosema.
🙂 ❤
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there is an upcoming event and i have to prepare things. 🙂 🙂 🙂 how have you been?
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Super busy too. Just slowly getting back into blogging. Hope to be by your blog soon to see what you’ve been up to my dear.
🙂 ❤
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awwww! sending power hugs your way, Staci! I hope this week will be productive but calm too! 😉 ❤ much love!
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I jut loved reading it,
It was simply beautiful dear.
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awww. thank you! 🙂
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Greetings from Singapore maria….and oh this could be a lovely pop song…
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rose I mean…hahhaha
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forgive me dear…its old age..cos I was trying to recall if I greeted maria already (bout me being in Singapore) while juggling on my thoughts with your lyrical poem..ooohhh dear..
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oh you are in Singapore darling??? are you migrating there??? and it’s okay! 😀 😀 😀
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no …on a lonnggg family vacation. ..and enjoying it so far..
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awwww. bless you and have fun! pasalubong? hehe
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I actually been considering that…seriously. ..gonna send you mail privately will check on your profile. ..bring you and maria something to remember Singapore by…
or something that will say ..”I remembered you guys when I was here”..
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awwwwww. ❤ ❤ ❤ that is so sweet of you! enjoy your time! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Good read this is!
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thank you, Alok! ❤
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Reflecting true love..that’s how I saw.
Wonderful!
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aww. that’s the hidden message. 🙂 thank you! ❤
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🙂
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Beautiful Rosema. This reminds me of Lang leav whom I also love. Beautifullly expressed in such few words.
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Lang Leav!!! That’s too much! ❤ ❤ ❤ i loove her!!!
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Beautiful and melodious repetition that give hope ❤
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Huuuuuun! 😘😘😘 thank youuuu! 😘😘😘
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