inside a cage filled with fog of fear, she stays alone trying to heal the scars of the past of all that is done, the ache of the present she cannot share with anyone, the uncertainty of the future coming with each rising sun.
will i be able to stop looking back and leave the footsteps i have made? will i regret the decisions i have made? will i be able to see a better tomorrow or all that’s left is heart’s sorrow?
as morning rays slip through the tiny cracks of her cave, she cannot help but let hope grow inside. with the leftover, brittle faith she holds on to, she’s coming out. she’s coming out.
she finally choose
to sink not in fog of fear
but in sea of faith.
oooh dear….so good to know you have keep your faith alive…someone so young and talented as you are will have to go a long way…
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awww. thank you for such lovely words, my dear Mich! Blessings to you! ❤
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I hope she frees herself from the cage and find some support to help her heal
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i am sure she will. 🙂 thank you!
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😦 there is nothing that can’t be shared with at least someone- it can be hard to find the right person or the right words though
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awww. thank you so much for the comment. yes. that’s true.
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Yes, it’s lonely ‘trying to heal the scars of the past of all that is done’ and ‘the uncertainty of the future coming with each rising sun’. Everyone needs some kind of faith, which is summed up so well in your haiku..
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yes. i agree. thank you for the lovely comment, Kim! ❤
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Faith will always conquer and guide you through fear Rosema. A great reflective and heartfelt haibun 🙂
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Your haiku centers all of this nicely: one still sinks, but in a sea of faith not a fog of fear. Very nice.
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yay. thank you, Frank!
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A very personal and effective haibun and haiku. Always rely on the sea of faith.
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yes. amen. thank you, Beverly! ❤
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Lots of hugs, Rose! You might not feel like you can share what you’ve gone through now, but faith will be your strength, and I know it’ll see you through.
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amen. amen. thank you, Chris! 🙂
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I love how this ends with faith. Faith. The thing that overcomes all fears. I am so glad to get this very real and very true haibun from you. Bless you dear heart.
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amen. amen. thank you dear! ❤
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Most beautiful choice for the deepest love imaginable! May He always be our one desire.
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amen! thank you! 🙂
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I love this song. Thanks for sharing.
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aww. thank you. 🙂
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The ending! The beautiful ending! I’m glad that she overcame her fear and decide to trust in faith.
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Hope and that sea of faith ~ I like the concluding lines ~
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awww.. thank you, Grace!
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“Brittle faith”–I imagine all the saints have experienced it at some time or other. But to sink in sea of faith is to be rescued by the One who still walks on water TOWARD us, His arms extended with LOVE. YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL, LITTLE SISTER OF MY HEART, ROSEY ❤
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awwwww. i got my eyes teary reading this my dear sissy. you are an angel. a lovely one! ❤ ❤ ❤ bless you dearly!
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Bless your sweet heart, Rosey–we can be angels in training together!! ❤
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amen! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Yippee!!!! Did you have a good Easter?? ❤
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yesssss. a full of sleep one. hehe. 😀 😀 😀
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Oh good, you got some needed rest!! 🙂
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yesss. 😀 ❤ ❤ ❤ how about yours dear?
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Up and down…the guests I invited didn’t come, just like they didn’t come at Thanksgiving… 😦 But God is still God, and HE’S GOOD!!
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awww. 😦 if i am there i will be with you everyday! 😀 😀 😀
P.S. I am thinking of going to US to work, sissy. It’s a long shot but… i’m praying. ❤
And yes! God is soooo good! all the Time!
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Oh my, are you kidding???!!!! Oh that would be a dream prayer come true for me!!!! I will now be “nagging” God to let you come–and close enough that you can see me from time to time, like holidays, for big dinners!!! Ooooh, I’m squealing with hopeful JOY!!!
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awwww. yes yes yes!!! please pray for me. ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤
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Do you have any notion of when, or where in the US you might be…. oh, how I want to see you, feed you! ❤
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awwwww. i have none yet. but i am praying! ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ i would love to be in Seattle! of coursE!!!!
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Yes! ❤
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Beautiful, sad and yet full of hope. Sometimes its hard to express the feeling of contradicting emotions happening at once, but you truly captured it here!
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aww. thank you so much, Dawn. i appreciate your words. ❤
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In awe of the words.
Life full of hope
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aww. thank you! 🙂
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