I whispered
for her to come out
but inside her hardened shell
she whispered
“wait up”.
And so I stayed
until she sees the
waiting world,
then today after
some wiggly wobbles
wiggly wobbles,
I watched her grand entrance
like a morning sun
being birth by beautiful dawn.
Flaunting her delicate gown
I knew she needs no crown.
She is the winged-queen.
Proudly birthed by cocoon’s grim.
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04.05.2017
©2017 Rosemawrites@A Reading Writer. All Rights Reserved.
Photo via Unsplash
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In response to Napowrimo Day 5…
In honor of Mary Oliver’s work, I’d like to challenge you to write a poem that is based in the natural world: it could be about a particular plant, animal, or a particular landscape.
So, let’s talk about anthropomorphism today: the attribution of human traits, emotions, and intentions to nonhumans. Hmmm…how does that differ from personification? Literary Devices.net explains “…there is a slight difference between these two. Personification is an act of giving human characteristics to animals or objects to create imagery, while anthropomorphism aims to make an animal or object behave and appear like they are human beings.”
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Read the rest of my Napowrimo 2017 poems here!
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Oh my! I’ve only seen it on TV and I’ve always wanted to see a butterfly emerging from its cocoon. Your words paint just a soothing and beautiful picture that I can’t wait to watch it in reality 😊😊
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awwww. i agree! it’s a delight. an amazing experience i must say! 😀
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Oh my, sister–this is both BEAUTIFUL and full of symbolic meaning, I dare say. You ROCK!!!
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yay! my sissy love read my symbol! 😀 😀 😀 i am writing this while i am on my life’s cocoon. it is grim and dark but eventually i will fly. ❤
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See, this is the way we do it, dear sister!!! God has given us the gift of poetry, as well as the gift of His Love and Saving Grace in Jesus. It is much easier–I know this just from last week (!)–to write our way through the dark place, holding His hand as He leads us back out into bright LIGHT. He dresses us in our beautiful royal robes and gives our wings new gilded sparkle!!! (Also, I had help from a very interesting movie I was watching–not in the “Christian” genre, but the story is surely much about faith in God’s miracles, Hope, “starting fresh”. I was SO Blessed by it–and turned the corner, into the light. The movie, if you’re interested, is “Henry Poole Is Here”.
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Ooooh. I will note that movie sister. And I agree. We can write and motivate ourselves and heal ourselves with God’s love. ❤ ❤ ❤
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YES and AMEN!!! ❤
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❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ i will be leaving office soon sissy. ❤ ❤ ❤ we'll talk again tomorrow. ❤
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Blessings to you–see you when I get up! 🙂 ❤
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YAY! God bless you dear! ❤
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And you as well, sweet sister Rosey ❤
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awww. thank you sissy! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Flaunting her delicate gown, I knew she needs no crown. – like you were watching her for a long time and waited so patiently to see her majestic arrival, this was a lovely bit of whimsy yet an allusion to deeper beauty of spirit and overcoming hardship of a new birth. Wonderful Rosema!
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“deeper beauty of spirit and overcoming hardship of a new birth”
You got the message clearly, Gina! Thank youuuu so much! ❤
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It is and always will be my pleasure! Love the beauty of the words.
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awww. thank you! ❤
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Ah, lovely as always, my friend!
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awww. thank you dear Sarah! ❤
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Fun thoughts about waiting for an inviting world. Liked this.
[small question: birth or birthed?; grim or grin? — that line threw me a bit.]
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thank you, Sabio! and i edited the birth to birthed. thank you for that. and grim is really grim. 😀 Thanks, again!
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Oh what a great take on the prompt!!!! LOVE it! Photo is beautiful and these words “Flaunting her delicate gown” — the winged queen! I shall always think that now when I see a Monarch. Perfect! 🙂 Soooo glad you posted!
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awwww. thank youu so much, Lillian! cannot miss this lovely prompt! ❤ ❤ <#3
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this is wonderful!
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thank you! 🙂
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So is indeed queen and needs no crown ~ Beautiful voice of butterfly ~
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thank you, Grace! ❤ ❤ ❤
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I love how you perfectly made us see through your words the birth of a beautiful butterfly…
But i wanted to say i feel it more unto you..i can sense (by reading your posts so far) that you are now becoming the beautiful woman that you had always wanted to be..and i saw your latest profile picture..dear you rock..
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awwwww. thank you soo soo much Mich! your eyes are so clear. ❤
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Lovely words of the birth of a beauty.
Kind regards
Anna :o]
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thank you, Anna! ❤
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I remember reading somewhere that these butterflies don’t know how beautiful they are, but others can see them. I liked the phrase that she doesn’t need any crown.
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ooh. that’s interesting. thank you, Frank!
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I confess – I loathe caterpillars, but love watching a butterfly burst from its cocoon with its beautiful wings! There’s something very triumphant about the way it emerges, and sometimes you can’t help but feel triumph for the creature.
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awwww. thank you for the confession! 😀 and i agree with the feeling of triumph! 🙂 thank you for reading and for the beautiful comment!
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That was beautiful! 😊
~Shweta from
My Random Ramblings
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thank you, Shweta! ❤
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Beautiful and symbolic at the same time.
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awww. thank you dear! ❤
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Most welcome, Rosema 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤
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Just beautiful Rosey! It is about a butterfly! 😀
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yes!! ❤ ❤ ❤ i love butterflies!
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Me too! 🙂 🙂
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yay!!!
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I love that wiggly voice of the butterfly.. it’s amazing to see them coming out of their cocoon.
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i cannot agree more! Thank you, Bjorn!
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“Flaunting her delicate gown I knew she needs no crown.” ~ this line! So beautifully put dearieee 💕
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awww. thank you dearie! 😀
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Your poem, graceful and doused with beauty, just like the butterfly Rosema ❤
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“graceful and doused with beauty” this is poetry!
and butterfly Rosema!! ❤ ❤ ❤ how can you be so darling, Davy!? 🙂
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Your words inspire it Rosema 🙂
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my words?????
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What I was trying to say, in a rather inarticulate way Rosema, is that the beauty of your poem inspired the response 🙂
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oh. (speechless) thank you! ❤
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Beautifully written!
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thank you! ❤
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You breathe new beauty in an already beautiful and natural thing, dear Rosema. I hope you wear your crown proudly too 😉
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awwwweeeee. yes we should! remember we’re all queens!!
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