Under the velvet sky glowing with the shadow of the moon, trickled with on and off star sparks, our feet in one rhythm traveled through time– of how we started, of how we loved, and eventually, of how we’ll end.
This night could have been a romantic one, if only goodbye will not be our closing line. But like how the night embraces the coming sun, it’s time to accept our ending has begun.
Scarlet leaves will dry
as winter ends autumn’s cry.
Heart will heal with time.
“This night could have been a romantic one, if only goodbye will not be our closing line”
Arrgghhh ..ouchh….a perfect stab…pierced through my heart..💔💔💔
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😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 😦
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This is just beautiful. It’s unhurried and thoughtful and right on target.
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aww. thank you for the wonderful comment!
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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Very beautiful haiku. There’s a bittersweet taste after reading your words. Settles in my soul with much tenderness.
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Oh the beginning of an end. It seems to me the shadows make an effort to convince you it is not.
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ooh. i agree. they tried. they failed.
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😦 😦 😦 😦 😦 This is tugging every possible heart string *sniff, sniff*
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awwww. 😦 😦 😦 huuuuugs dear NJ!
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Huuuugggsss😊😊😊
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❤ ❤ ❤ ❤
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Ooooh
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aww. thanks, love!
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Oh my, this left me hushed, Rosey…
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thank you, sissy! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Very welcome ❤
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❤ ❤ ❤
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❤
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Deep and poignant.
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thank you Paul! ❤
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‘the night embraces the coming sun,’…love how the line emerges from the shadows of night….
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thank you, Ma’am! 🙂
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A beautiful and wondrous haibun Rosema. The tears of the prose flow into the haiku.
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awwweee. ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ your comments are always beautiful, Davy!
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🙂 🙂 🙂 I still can’t do those heart things Rosema
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HAHAHAHA. Davy. Connect this < and this 3 that makes heart. 😀
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❤ ❤ When the teacher appears the learning begins Rosema 🙂
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cheeeers to the hearts! 😀 😀 😀 ❤ ❤ ❤
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I am running amok with them now Rosema 🙂
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HAHAHAHAHA! That’s night to know! 😀
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🙂
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I liked the second line of the haiku with “winter ends autumn’s cry” and how the flow of the night to morning shows the flow of a relationship to its end.
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awww. such a lovely comment, Frank. Thank you so much! ❤
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Such a poignant and sad haibun, the beginning of the end. The haiku weeps.
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oh. what a beautiful comment. 🙂 thank you! ❤
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Beautiful poem Rosey! ❤
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thank you, PJ! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Such a sad ending but we will go on, smiles ~ I believe in that healing ~
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awww. yes. healing. ❤ thank you, Grace!
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Ooohhh this is soooo good Rosema. It’s sad yes, but there’s beauty in the sadness.
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awweee. i have to cling to the beauty in sadness. thank you dear! ❤ ❤ ❤
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Wonderful write Rosema. I know I have been so absent. Life has been so busy, and today I am exhausted. Thought I would drop in quickly to say hi and hope all is we’ll.😘
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awwee. you are so sweet Staci! thank you so much for dropping by. i truly appreciate it. go get some rest darling. ❤ ❤ ❤ looking forward to your new poems! ❤
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thank you so much! ❤
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Of course 🙂
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